My first written card

[Typhloman_332]

Dark Battle Warrior

lvl 5

DARK

1900/1800

Warrior/Effect

Effect:

When this card battles with a monster that has the same Level, Type, and/or DEF, decrease this card's ATK by 700 during the Damage Step only. When this card battles a monster with a higher Level, or is a Spellcaster-Type monster, this card gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step only.

 

Please give OCG errors and balancing help. Thanks for looking at my post

 

^_^

[NicktheQuick2312]

Not bad I say. I'd make it a higher level though...

 

^_^

rating:7/10

[squirellboy]

Awesome! Make it a higher level though

[Docomodake]

Correct OCG (Official Card Grammar) :

Dark Battle Warrior

What's it's Attribute? [] Warrior / Effect [] Level 4 [] 1900 / 1800

When this card battles with a monster that has the same Level, Type, and/or DEF, decrease this card's ATK by 700 during the Damage Step only. When this card battles a monster with a higher Level, or is a Spellcaster-Type monster, this card gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step only.

 

Seems like a UP Steamroid. 2/5. Try harder next time. ;D

[Protoman]

it is like steamroid raise its level and evilduck corrected theocg so yeah 2/5 or 4/10

[Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer]

8/10.

4 stars.

One and three fifths thumbs up (can somebody help me find the missing two fifths of my thumb?)

 

Not bad for a newbie. Keep going and you'll avoid taking the noobish side of the YCM.

 

ATK and DEF needs reducing, however.

[Typhloman_332]

thanks for the comments guys, i'll use the correct OCG when I make the card and give credit to evilduckjoe. i'll also raise the lvl, thx guys. Oh, forgot the DARK attribute.

 

Edit: it's all fixed, thx guys