bastionsgirl Posted August 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 Lol nice cardz 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Guest Star Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 Nice cards. I like the "warrior of the elementals. where did you find that picture, because it's awesome. ^_^ 8/10 Nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaymin Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 I like the lion ^^ 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bastionsgirl Posted September 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2007 One new card. Sorry. I was very busy and this is all I came up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kallan Posted September 8, 2007 Report Share Posted September 8, 2007 Just a note - Konami doesn't use "on your side of the field" anymore. They use "you control". They also eliminated "as long as this card remains on your side of the field," because, unless a card effect specifically says it works somewhere off the field, the card effect only works when it's in play. They also now say "Activate only..." They don't say "from your hand"; they leave that part out. Now it's just "discard." Also, always say ATK and DEF when refering to the Attack or Defense power of a monster. And, they rarely use parentheses (for "(except Direct Damage)"), so just use commas to separate it. [,except Direct Damage,] Konami also uses now "to your opponent," instead of "to your opponent's Life Points." They no longer say "as a result of battle"; they say "by battle". One more small thing - capitalize "Card" if you're going to say "Monster Card". If you're just going to say "monster," which is the recent form, do not capitalize it. Overall, the cards are good, but the OCG is way back when. To make your cards look newer, make those types of wordings. ^.^Konami has this weird shortening thing going on. *shrugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bastionsgirl Posted September 8, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2007 Thanks for the advice, Kallan. i didn't know all that. I'll try to improve on all that in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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