Elemental Master

[bastionsgirl]

bump

[Dante Dimercurio]

Lol nice cardz 9/10

[bastionsgirl]

Thanks

[Guest Star]

Nice cards. I like the "warrior of the elementals. where did you find that picture, because it's awesome. ^_^

 

8/10 Nice.

[Shaymin]

I like the lion ^^ 10/10

[bastionsgirl]

One new card. Sorry. I was very busy and this is all I came up with.

[Kallan]

Just a note - Konami doesn't use "on your side of the field" anymore. They use "you control". They also eliminated "as long as this card remains on your side of the field," because, unless a card effect specifically says it works somewhere off the field, the card effect only works when it's in play.

 

They also now say "Activate only..." They don't say "from your hand"; they leave that part out. Now it's just "discard." Also, always say ATK and DEF when refering to the Attack or Defense power of a monster. And, they rarely use parentheses (for "(except Direct Damage)"), so just use commas to separate it. [,except Direct Damage,]

 

Konami also uses now "to your opponent," instead of "to your opponent's Life Points." They no longer say "as a result of battle"; they say "by battle". One more small thing - capitalize "Card" if you're going to say "Monster Card". If you're just going to say "monster," which is the recent form, do not capitalize it.

 

Overall, the cards are good, but the OCG is way back when. To make your cards look newer, make those types of wordings. ^.^

Konami has this weird shortening thing going on. *shrugs*

[bastionsgirl]

Thanks for the advice, Kallan. i didn't know all that. I'll try to improve on all that in the future.