Sbamber Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 [align=center]I haven't made a card in quite some time. So, I decided to make one. I think it is bad, but who gives a donkey's ass? This card is a preview of my newest set that will be coming out in early 2009. Magical MagicianAC000-00001V1.•V2. Effect:When this card is activated draw 5 card from the top of your Deck. Look at the cards. If 2 of the 5 cards are Trap or Spell cards, this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF. If only 1 or less is a Trap or Spell card, this card losses 500 ATK and DEF. Attack: 2200 Defense: 1700 Picture Credit to Vampvala, http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime/vampvala/anime-44.jpg?o=36[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardTimeNow Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Eh, maybe raise the level a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendalus Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 What i think you ment to say was. When this card is summoned show the top 5 cards of your deck to your opponent. otherwise you could just say "Yep i got 2 trap cards she gains 1000 attack" also do you keep the 5 cards I mean does anything happen to them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 What i think you ment to say was. When this card is summoned show the top 5 cards of your deck to your opponent. otherwise you could just say "Yep i got 2 trap cards she gains 1000 attack" also do you keep the 5 cards I mean does anything happen to them? Well, you would have to show your opponent. Otherwise they wouldn't believe you, and ask to see anyway, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 the card's okay, OCG needs work. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Its a good card, but the picture is a little squished height wise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 the card's okay' date=' OCG needs work. 6/10[/quote'] What is wrong with my OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 yeah i noticed that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 yeah i noticed that Noticed what? Noobs today, don't EVER make sense... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 i meant what Corydarkstar wrote. the ocg problem are very hard to notice. here what's proper in my eyes, "When this card is Summoned, draw 5 cards from your Deck. If 2 or more of the cards drawn are SPELL or TRAP cards, this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF. If less than 2 SPELL or TRAP cards are drawn, this card loses 500 ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 i meant what Corydarkstar wrote. the ocg problem are very hard to notice. here what's proper in my eyes' date=' "When this card is Summoned, draw 5 cards from your Deck. If 2 or more of the cards drawn are SPELL or TRAP cards, this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF. If less than 2 SPELL or TRAP cards are drawn, this card loses 500 ATK and DEF.[/quote'] If you are talking to somebody like that, Quote them. No, your OCG is off. Look at OCG that people post. Or ask other members. It is Spell and Trap, not SPELL and TRAP. You only capitalize all the letters if it is: WATER, EARTH, FIRE, LIGHT, etc... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 OCG problems and OPed. need to edit the pic. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 well you still forgot the commas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chainsaw20x6 Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 its pick up, not draw unless you mean draw(which would be mega OP), and you have to say what happens after (put them on top of your Deck, bottom of Deck, Deck then shuffle, Graveyard, ect) , when this card is activated should be When this card is Summoned (i think)loses, not losses picture is squishy it would make more since for it to have 1700 ATK and gain 1500 when you 2 or more of the cards you picked up are magic, and not have the minus 500 part 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Heres a few problems • Overpowered. And I mean, very overpowered• Come up with a better card name. All Magicians are Magical• OCG is terrible• Squished pic Overall, 5/10I suggest you read some cards and see why this card is really overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest PikaPerson01 Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 OCG errors, ridiculously overpowered, bad name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 OCG errors: losses = losesSpell card = Spell Card Nice card, 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Use Normal Summoned instead of activated, good pic, change level to 6, do you add the cards to your hand or discard them? 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Trap or Spell cards = Spell or Trap Cards Lower the ATK and DEF increase. Maybe make it lvl 6. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Heres a few problems • Overpowered. And I mean' date=' very overpowered• Come up with a better card name. All Magicians are Magical• OCG is terrible• Squished pic Overall, 5/10I suggest you read some cards and see why this card is really overpowered[/quote'] Says it all.Seriously though. Change the name. That's dumb...it's like saying"The Sea Serpent of the Sea"It's completely redundant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 It looks really nice. The image is nice, nice effect. It's good to see a card from you, Sbamber! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 Good card, but needs better OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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