Parting Shot Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 [align=center] Effect: Activate only when a DARK monster you control is destroyed by battle. Select 1 DARK Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard with a Level equal to or lower than the Level of the destroyed monster and Special Summon it. As long as the selected monster remains face-up on the field, the effects of DARK monsters you control cannot be negated. @Everybody - I was thinking, and would it still need a cost if I changed the last line to be: "While the selected monster remains face-up on the field, once per turn, when the effect of a DARK monster you control would be negated by the effect of your opponent's Spell or Trap Card, you can negate the effect and destroy the Spell or Trap Card." ? I think that's a little less powerful, as it's only once per turn, but still keeps it useful. Pic Credit: Wolfberserker, of course[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 Well you could always say you can't summon the destroyed monster,that would make it more balanced,and just in case you don't get it(cause I understand nothing of what I said),you could run 3 copies of this card and when 1 of your monsters are destroyed you could just go ahead and bring it right back.But it seems balanced,I'd surely use it in my Monarch Deck,it's good like the pic fair and seriously good name.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 Dear god, this is a fun-to-play card.I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted October 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 Well you could always say you can't summon the destroyed monster' date='that would make it more balanced,and just in case you don't get it(cause I understand nothing of what I said),you could run 3 copies of this card and when 1 of your monsters are destroyed you could just go ahead and bring it right back.But it seems balanced,I'd surely use it in my Monarch Deck,it's good like the pic fair and seriously good name.8/10[/quote']I considered that, and now I'm thinking it might be better to add that in. Thanks for the comments ^_^ Dear god' date=' this is a fun-to-play card.I love it.[/quote']Haha! In a good or bad way? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 Make it balanced by making it a continue. trap card and say "When this card is destroyed, remove the monster from play. When the monster is destroyed, remove the monster and this card from play." or something like that. hope that helps. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 Well I can't find a single OCG error, which is good. I like the pic. And the effect seems fine and balanced to me. Nice card, 9.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 Nice OCG, Good Effect, Wonderful Picture! I think this well deserve a 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted October 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 Make it balanced by making it a continue. trap card and say "When this card is destroyed' date=' remove the monster from play. When the monster is destroyed, remove the monster and this card from play." or something like that. hope that helps. :)[/quote']Hmmmm, an interesting idea that will have to be tested! Thanks for the suggestion ^_^ Well I can't find a single OCG error' date=' which is good. I like the pic. And the effect seems fine and balanced to me. Nice card, 9.2/10.[/quote']Nice OCG' date=' Good Effect, Wonderful Picture! I think this well deserve a 10/10[/quote']Thanks guys, I'm glad you like it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted October 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Bumpity! I could still use some more suggestions on balancing it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Rose Phoenix® Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 I don't think there is much. It's a great card, but usualy, when a card is pushed and made to powerful, they get banned. I think it's pretty balanced, although, you could put in "pay 200 life points once activated" or something, that way, it won't seem to much like a total bonus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Nice card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Hmm...... I don't there should be any changes that are yet to be need.Three words, or more:I Love this card. ~Enrise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 love the pic1/1cant find any ocg errers5/5love the name1/1overall 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Change to a Continuous Trap Card, good pic and effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Nice card, The picture is good, but a little too dark for my taste. The OCG/grammar is of course great, and the effect seems balanced to me. nice work, 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 IMO, add somekind of cost to it, but that's me. Anyways, not a bad card Darth, not your best though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Well you could always say you can't summon the destroyed monster' date='that would make it more balanced,and just in case you don't get it(cause I understand nothing of what I said),you could run 3 copies of this card and when 1 of your monsters are destroyed you could just go ahead and bring it right back.But it seems balanced,I'd surely use it in my Monarch Deck,it's good like the pic fair and seriously good name.8/10[/quote']I considered that, and now I'm thinking it might be better to add that in. Thanks for the comments ^_^ Dear god' date=' this is a fun-to-play card.I love it.[/quote']Haha! In a good or bad way? :Pgood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Pics not really doing it for me.It's an interesting effect, and I have no idea how to go about changing it :P9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 its not ov'pw to me...i mean it only work well in a DARK/zombie deck... its been long long time since i see a card from you.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 I don't think its OverpoweredAnd I don't see anything wrong with the card9.8/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 I don't think there is much. It's a great card' date=' but usualy, when a card is pushed and made to powerful, they get banned. I think it's pretty balanced, although, you could put in "pay 200 life points once activated" or something, that way, it won't seem to much like a total bonus.[/color']Yeah, I was thinking of adding a cost. Thanks for the comments ^_^ Nice card!Thanks! ^_^ Hmm...... I don't there should be any changes that are yet to be need.Three words' date=' or more:I Love this card. ~Enrise[/quote']Yay!! ^_^ I'm glad you like it so much :D ' pid='1288543' dateline='1225208815']love the pic1/1cant find any ocg errers5/5love the name1/1overall 10/10Sweet! 10/10 is cool ^_^ Change to a Continuous Trap Card' date=' good pic and effect. 9/10[/quote']Hmmm, an interesting idea, but I'd have to change the effect as well. What did you have in mind for making it a Cont Trap? Nice card' date=' The picture is good, but a little too dark for my taste. The OCG/grammar is of course great, and the effect seems balanced to me. nice work, 9.5/10[/quote']Thanks for the comments ^_^ IMO' date=' add somekind of cost to it, but that's me. Anyways, not a bad card Darth, not your best though. 7/10[/quote']Yeah, the cost thing has definitely been suggested, I'm just not sure what to make it :P good.Lol' date=' gotcha ;) Pics not really doing it for me.It's an interesting effect, and I have no idea how to go about changing it :P9.8/10Lol, well, thanks for trying to think of how to change it :P its not ov'pw to me...i mean it only work well in a DARK/zombie deck... its been long long time since i see a card from you..Yeah' date=' that's true. And, yeah, I'm going to try to make more cards from here on, as long as school work doesn't keep me totally busy :P I don't think its OverpoweredAnd I don't see anything wrong with the card9.8/10 :DHmm, okay. I've gotten so many mixed reactions I'm not sure what to do :P Thanks for the comments ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 It's not overpowered, it's just powerful and not useless.I like it. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 It's not overpowered' date=' it's just powerful and not useless.I like it. 10/10[/quote']Hm, I see what you mean. Thanks ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Bumpity! I've had several "yes add a cost!" and several "no it's fine without", I don't know which to do :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nubcakez Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 maybe face-up Defense Position Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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