Duelz Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Gaara from Naruto Shippuden. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 OCG errors: Trap Carddestroyed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 OCG Errors: In the first sentence put a space after the period.destroyedNot "him", but "this card"Trap Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duelz Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 I just fixed OCG errors by the way. Ignore the posts before this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 You didn't fix the space after "monster." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 UGH! this is getting annoying.Why cant there be a noob thread.But it's pretty good for your first tryLots of OCG errors.4/10.....Because it's your first one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParagonX Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Bad OCG, good pic. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 I like the pic but you must fix the effect. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Terrible OCG overpowered slightly? 6.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sucka369 Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 i like it but its monsterS!!! not monster 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenXcalibur Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 :) Yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elite-Sannin Posted August 16, 2011 Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 UGH! this is getting annoying.Why cant there be a noob thread.But it's pretty good for your first tryLots of OCG errors.4/10.....Because it's your first one I personally agree that there should be a noob thread for people like me lol My Rating:6/10 because ur a noobSome OCG errorsGood Pic attack should be lowered some because the effect would make him Over PoweredOver all its an alright card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThorGodOfThunder Posted August 27, 2011 Report Share Posted August 27, 2011 OCG fix: "This card cannot be destroyed by battle, Monster Effects or Spell Cards."I think this will make him a little OPed.Then I'm nor sure what the last effect means... but it might be something like: "When this card battles a monster with 1500 ATK or less, destroy it with this card's effect without damage application."Good picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted August 27, 2011 Report Share Posted August 27, 2011 Terrible OCG, very good picture. 6.258/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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