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[Dr.Pain]

H.I.S Hacker Intelligence System

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Artwork

In lower Right cornor of Cards

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The Card

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Effect

You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control another "H.I.S" face-up on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle as long as another Machine-Type monster is face-up on the field. When this card declares an attack you can negate the attack to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field and inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

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[Brittle Ice]

It is very nice.

Type

I like it.

8/10

^_^

[Dr.Pain]

 

Type

 

 

 

Loldang

 

1 Error short of perfect xD

 

Anyways thx for comment :D

[Spire]

Machine-type = Machine-Type

 

Other then that, great card! 8.5/10.

[Skarlet]

9/10, raise the ATK just slightly say 1700

[Darkdragonriseing]

Very Nice looking Card kind of goes with other types like a lot of cards should.

Very well time and no typos so thats just great .

[Bengal]

Good card, I like the picture and it fits the card well. The effect is good, and the OCG/grammar is almost perfect.

 

Addition errors:

 

Damage = damage (unless refering to Battle Damage or Damage Step)

 

good work,

 

9/10

[Toffee.]

Awesome image is awesome

[Dr.Pain]

Thanks For all the Positve Comments :D

I'll Start Editing now

[K.B. strategist]

When this card declares an attack you can negate the attack to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field and inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

^Not sure whether direct damage is capitalized, but i assume it is as Battle Damage is.

Other errors pointed out.

Very useful, and annoying for your opponent. I like it. 9/10

[Dr.Pain]

D:

 

I just realized i didn't save card xD

 

Just a sec before editing

 

EDIT

 

Done! :D

[Dr.Pain]

Bawmp

[∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮]

"bawmp"?well,anyways,i think it is 8.7/10

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Well, we really need to see more cards of this set, or I won't understand it. Besides, this card is overpowered.

 

And I'm pretty sure you need to post a link to where you got the picture from.