xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Hi! Im a new guy, and this is my first card please no harsh feelings!! THANK YOU!!!^_^,xXxXDuuuudeXxX This Pic was found in MtgStaples.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Future L Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Start a new sentence with for. Good pic, I would raise it's ATK to 1600, DEF to 1300. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Yeah But I made it so Its attack can go up and its used for Gladiator Beast Fusion Monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Raise it's stats, good pic, for should start a new sentence. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest PikaPerson01 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 God damn? A +2? <_< Stats are fine. It's effect that may be too much. 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 the pic looks like its an actual galdiater beast ^_^ good choiceas everyone else has said before, stats and OCG 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Thank you!^__^! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 was attacked = was selected as an attack target________________________________________________ Nice Gladiator Beast support. ^_^8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Ty, Very much DeMeNTeD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaloog91 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 The OCG is the only problem I see here The stat's are perfect because if you noticed Gladiator beasts with powerful effects are generally weak. Ex.Sector who's atk and def are bellow a 1000Not to mention Murmilo and Beastaria aren't the strongest monsters ever. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Nice work! I like it! I can tell that you spent time on this, and as u lrn i know u will bcome a g8 card maker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 OCG errors: Draw = draw (unless refering to Draw Phase) Gladitor Beast = "Gladiator Beast" (in the second line) put a period at the end of the effect (It might be there, I just can't see it) Good card, I like the picture, the effect is pretty good, and the OCG/grammar isn't too bad. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Thank You so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Very nice for a new person. pic = 7/10, effect = 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Thank you Azmoudis!^___________^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 This is your first card? I must say i'm impressed, 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Electriz = cheap You search for him, Then draw 2If you chain some effects right, You would get a massive draw bonus XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 Thank You guys^____^ BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 2 Cards seems a bit much.But you're new, and that's on heck of a Card :D Keep up the Great Work, and follow the Advice given before ;)-Yosherz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Thank You Lazer Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Sorry for double post BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 That's great. It's rarely to find a pic matched for a GB. And change "for" to "For", because it's a start of a new sentence. Overall, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 That's great. It's rarely to find a pic matched for a GB. And change "for" to "For"' date=' because it's a start of a new sentence. Overall, 9/10[/quote']JOV1's right great pic's are really hard to find. Bravo, you win my respect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Good Pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Ty CamosityDude, i will make a new card soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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