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"Medusaur"


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Its a Medusa, but its also a Dinosaur (not Dinosaur-Type monster)

 

(Picture by kunkka at www.deviantart.com)

 

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If this card is in face-up Defense Position, return it to the owner's hand. The effects of all Defense Position monsters on the field are negated. When this card declares an attack, return all face-down Defense Position monsters on the field to the top of the owners' Decks, and shuffle the Decks.[/align]

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9/10 :D It's great. One little bit of rephrasing at the end is needed however. I can't say what it is but it doesn't flow like a real card.

 

Instead of saying "Return all face-down Defense Position monsters on the field to the top of the owners' Decks, and shuffle the Decks."

 

It should say "Return all face-down Defense Position monsters on the field to the controller’s respective Decks and shuffle them." This is the proper wording for it but yours is completely fine.

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Change level to 9

Uh, it is level 9, though it shouldn't be. Levels above 7 don't matter one bit unless you give them a summoning restriction. You could have a level 11 monster with 3000 ATK, and it would be the same as a blue-eyes unless you made it harder to summon. In my opinion, this card should be level 8, and no higher, unless a restriction to summon it is added, which I don't think is necessary since it's effect isn't powerful enough to warrant it.

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