Careless Whisper Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 It looks good, but I'am not really feeling the text....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 It looks good' date=' but I'am not really feeling the text.......[/quote']You said it all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Why am i thinking that they're stealing the words out of my mouth? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 I think its pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Usually, people get better with more experience. But it looks to me like you keep getting worse. You've overcontrasted some areasSeverely over sharpened the renderWhatever that thing along the bottom and left of the render is just rediculousThere is no lighting, depth, or flowWhy are there these terribly ugly black areas in the background?You've made the background dull and grayHeck, the background just looks like a mash of c4ds and then you decided to rip holes out of itAnd the text is just horrid I'd be able to say more if the background was there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 For once I actually agree with Problematica. What's with all the random black areas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted November 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 The random black areas are supposed to represent that it's a puzzle. A Crystal Puzzle, and this character is supposed to be part of my book "The Silent Memory." Starring a man who only has part of his memory. And the one thing he truly understands about himself is his name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 If there is a meaning behind the piece, then there shouldn't need to be an explanation.If you wanted to go for something like that then maybe you should have gone with a scenery background of some place and took out shapes that look like puzzle pieces. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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