RixMaadi Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 I'm still having trouble with wording. Wasn't sure on how to word this, but I hope that the idea is understandable. Pic from: http://www.wizards.com/magic/images/mtgcom/arcana300/RavToken_knight.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 Graveyard, grammar problem, good pic and effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 OVERPOWERED. lower the ATK or give it a negative effect >_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted November 15, 2008 Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 The above have said it all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RixMaadi Posted November 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2008 OVERPOWERED. lower the ATK or give it a negative effect >_< I thought the weakness was actually having to offer two monsters to tribute summon him for it to work, along with needing to set up with some dead Monarchs. <.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RixMaadi Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Bump, for any last comments and opinions, and more feelings on if this is too strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 If he's king of all monarchs you should have to tribute 2 existing monarchs on your field to summon him and then you should put "ONce per turn you can pay 500 Life Points to remove from play 1 monarch in your Graveyard to activate that removed card's effect" that might work a bit better.6.5/10 for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Some grammar issues. Is a little OPed in my opinion. Picture is cool and the effect is somewhat original. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RixMaadi Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 If he's king of all monarchs you should have to tribute 2 existing monarchs on your field to summon him and then you should put "ONce per turn you can pay 500 Life Points to remove from play 1 monarch in your Graveyard to activate that removed card's effect" that might work a bit better.6.5/10 for now. Ya, that would have been a nice idea, or maybe even make him a synchro with Monarchs and have that effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Make the effect something like: "Once per turn, You can remove said monarch to gain said monarch's effect". Also, Why make it a LIGHT-Attribute Warrior-Type?This makes 3 LIGHTs, and 2 Warriors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RixMaadi Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Make the effect something like: "Once per turn' date=' You can remove said monarch to gain said monarch's effect". Also, Why make it a LIGHT-Attribute Warrior-Type?This makes 3 LIGHTs, and 2 Warriors.[/quote'] Well, LIGHT just seemed like the most appropriate attribute for the King of Kings. Also, I wasn't sure what type could represent a King besides Warrior. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 Summoning Effect (I think) Pic is kinda meh-ish (in my opinion) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza 101 Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 me likey. 9y/10y Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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