Hyako Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 I started working on a card set and i'm trying to keep the effects and everything balanced, if they're not bare with me, i'll learn fast. I'll gradually add cards as time goes by. Please post comments and any changes that might need to be made. Updates:August 30th-Keddiro the Fated Savior's Atk changed from 3300 to 2600, Def changed from 2600 to 2300.-Black Lady Knight added.-Little Girl Sword Fighter added.-Mysterious Fencer added.-Angelic Sword Girl added.-Determined Lady Fighter added. -Bloodshed added. -Together we fight, Together we die added. -Butterfly Mages Seieki and Oouka added. -Ultimate Defender Keitara added.-Execution of the Traitor added.-Unseal Aura added.-Defender Castle added.-Hyakudo, the Legendary Swordmaster added. August 31st-Heavy Axeman Borko added.-Meryun, the Moon's Kunoichi Card Comments:Meryun, the Moon's Kunoichi - Her effect is "When this card is attacked, you may look through your deck for two Trap or Magic cards. Place them on the field face-down in Defense Position and switch this card to face-down Position as well. ( Must have two open monster zones ) Shuffle the face-down cards and then your opponent must choose a new target for their monster's attack. At the end of the Battle Phase, or if this monster is attacked, the face-down Magic and Trap cards are sent to the Graveyard." If you cannot read it, I tried to give her something like Mystical Hats, to act as like Clones of herself, like what Ninja do to escape. Credits:-Credit to tehodis for the image for Execution of the Traitor.-Credit to tehodis for the image for Unseal Aura.-Credit to tehodis for the image for Defender Castle.-Credit to tehodis for the image for Hyakudo, the Legendary Swordmaster.-Again, Credit to tehodis for the image for Heavy Axeman Borko.-Credti to tehodis for the image for Meryun, the Moon's Kunoichi. Note: These cards will probably have errors, but they should hopefully become minimal as my experience in card making raises. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 Wow great effect the can really do some heavy damage it's gret 9/10 & I can't wait to see the rest of the deck but try bringing his ATK down to 2600 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 Thanks^^ Alright, i'll do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 Wow real good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshgood704 Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 9/10 pretty well balenced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 Can anyone help me find a decent pic of an Iron Golem, or at least a Golem made out of metal? A big, bulky Golem would be nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 go to photobucket.com then go and put Golem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshgood704 Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 ill try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 go to photobucket.com then go and put Golem Tried that' date=' didn't get any good pics of what i'm looking for. ill try Thank you very much, I need the pic for a Defender monster i'm making for this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 *I do not judge On Grammer* Little Girl - Very good effect can keep bringing back & you could sacrifice could help you in any situation but her name is not very original. Overall 8/10 Staple Potential Blade Lady Knight - Again Name not very original but she is perfect a greataddition to Warriro Deck 9/10 Fencer - Remindes Me of D.D Warrior Lady it's kinda over powerd 7/10 Sword Girl - Perfect 9/10 She Should have an effect Overall 9/10 I really love your work & look foward to seeing more from you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 *I do not judge On Grammer* Little Girl - Very good effect can keep bringing back & you could sacrifice could help you in any situation but her name is not very original. Overall 8/10 Staple Potential Blade Lady Knight - Again Name not very original but she is perfect a greataddition to Warriro Deck 9/10 Fencer - Remindes Me of D.D Warrior Lady it's kinda over powerd 7/10 Sword Girl - Perfect 9/10 She Should have an effect Overall 9/10 I really love your work & look foward to seeing more from you! I know they're not very original, i'll probably work on them. Fencer - I don't get how he's like Warrior Lady, explain if it's not a big deal, and I don't think it's overpowered, it's effect is weaker then Flame Wingman for one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshgood704 Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 cant really find anything sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 This looks like an iron golem to me >.>anyways nice cards.P.S. link is herehttp://www.dd-online.ru/images/photo/3/11.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 This looks like an iron golem to me >.>anyways nice cards.P.S. link is herehttp://www.dd-online.ru/images/photo/3/11.gif It's not finding A Golem that's the problem' date=' it's finding one that I like.And thanks^^ cant really find anything sorry Don't stress it, i'll find one eventually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 i have a golem set i could find some pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dogsun Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 wow like your card i like the ange girl one the best 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 if you have photoshop or macromedia, you can edit out the words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 if you have photoshop or macromedia' date=' you can edit out the words Thanks for the help, neither are quite what I want though. But I appreciate your efforts alot, thanks again^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 I apologize in advance if i'm not allowed to bump yet, if i'm not, it will not happen again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoShinryu Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 some of them r way 2 strong, even with the down siddes of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 some of them r way 2 strong' date=' even with the down siddes of them[/quote']That's the reason for this thread^^ Point out what should change and i'll do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 *I do not judge On Grammer* Little Girl - Very good effect can keep bringing back & you could sacrifice could help you in any situation but her name is not very original. Overall 8/10 Staple Potential Blade Lady Knight - Again Name not very original but she is perfect a greataddition to Warriro Deck 9/10 Fencer - Remindes Me of D.D Warrior Lady it's kinda over powerd 7/10 Sword Girl - Perfect 9/10 She Should have an effect Overall 9/10 I really love your work & look foward to seeing more from you! I know they're not very original' date=' i'll probably work on them. Fencer - I don't get how he's like Warrior Lady, explain if it's not a big deal, and I don't think it's overpowered, it's effect is weaker then Flame Wingman for one.[/quote'] No No What I meant was that Fencer's Effect reminded me of that card not Fencer himself. Anyway, these cards are getting better & better good luck if you are deciding to make a whole deck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 *I do not judge On Grammer* Little Girl - Very good effect can keep bringing back & you could sacrifice could help you in any situation but her name is not very original. Overall 8/10 Staple Potential Blade Lady Knight - Again Name not very original but she is perfect a greataddition to Warriro Deck 9/10 Fencer - Remindes Me of D.D Warrior Lady it's kinda over powerd 7/10 Sword Girl - Perfect 9/10 She Should have an effect Overall 9/10 I really love your work & look foward to seeing more from you! I know they're not very original' date=' i'll probably work on them. Fencer - I don't get how he's like Warrior Lady, explain if it's not a big deal, and I don't think it's overpowered, it's effect is weaker then Flame Wingman for one.[/quote'] No No What I meant was that Fencer's Effect reminded me of that card not Fencer himself. Anyway, these cards are getting better & better good luck if you are deciding to make a whole deck! I still don't see it, since D. D. Warrior Lady's effect makes her and the monster she battles get removed from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gungeransu Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 D.D. Warrior Lady and Fencer are really nothing alike. Fencer is more like a Flame Wingman, only you don't need lame cards to get him out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyako Posted August 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 D.D. Warrior Lady and Fencer are really nothing alike. Fencer is more like a Flame Wingman' date=' only you don't need lame cards to get him out.[/quote'] So do you have opinions on effects that need changing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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