this is my first post, I hope you like it

[Altαir]

This is the Light themed deck i am creating. Please go easy on me this is my first post.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of Bird Of Light. When this card is summoned, destroy all Spell/Trap cards on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn, instead of attacking, this card is allowed to destroy up to two Spell/Trap cards on the field. When this card is destroyed, you may select one Spell/Trap card in your hand. This card is Special Summoned back onto the field in face-up Defense Position and the selected card becomes an Equip Card. By the cost of 500 Life Points each turn, this card can stay on the field. If you cannot pay this amount, destroy this card with the selected card and remove them from play. If the selected card is destroyed, destroy this card.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of Tiger Of Light. When this card is Summoned, destroy all Monster Cards in your opponent's hand. Once per turn, instead of attacking, this card is allowed to negate one monster's attack points to 0 and switch the monster into Attack Position. When this card is destroyed, you may select one Monster Card in your hand. This card returns back onto the field in face up Defense Position and the selected card becomes an Equip Card. By the cost of 500 Life Points each turn, this card can stay on the field. If you cannot pay this amount, destroy this card and the selected card and remove them from play. If the selected card is destroyed, destroy this card.

 

 

 

This monster is also treated as a LIGHT monster. This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except for the effect of Lunar Light. This monster must stay in Defense Mode. If this monster is in Defense Mode, it is allowed to attack. During Damage Calculation use this cards Defense Points instead of Attack Points. This monster cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. For every monster destroyed by this monster, you gain 700 Life Points. Five turns after this card was Summoned, you lose 1000 Life Points and this card is destroyed and removed from play.

 

 

[Shiranui]

Sacrifice=tribute

Along with some other OCG errors but your cards are pretty good considering this is your first post. Keep at it and check the OCG thread and you'll get much better. 6.5/10

[Altαir]

thnx I'll make those changes

[Altαir]

Updated Changes

[Kaisu]

Umm..

Light,

Trap cards arn't supposed to have Equip symbols.

If it is to be equiped, it needs to be in the wording.

[Guest xbon]

6.75/10

Lots of OCG errors scattered throughout the cards.

[RickiMinaj]

with long effects, post descriptions, and there are a few Errors here and there. I like the images though, and great for a new comer ^_^