skydawn Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Here is the cards i made, its my first time so i dont expect them to be really good haha. please rate and tell me whats bad about them so i get better =). these cards are an angel Deck plus Final Fantasy 8 characters. hope you guys like it =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krobelus Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Hmm not too bad, not too bad. I found a few spelling errors and typos in some of the cards. You should fix those. If you want to know which ones specifically, message me. Ciao~Raz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jugador Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 AWESOME for a first. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 9/10 not bad for the first time ........ make a fusion monster.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skydawn Posted September 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 sweet thx guys =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 9/10 not bad for the first time. But Light mirror force already exist as Mirror force and there isn't a Angel type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skydawn Posted September 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Lol. thank you =). i know theres no angel type but im really a fan of them haha.. i wish there were angel type lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trivial12 Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 What an excellent collection I have to say. My first collection was a zombie collection and I only made like about 10 cards or less and they were not as good as that. So I would like to ask where you got all them fabolous pictures from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 There is NO such thing as a Quick-Play Trap Card!! 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcademuffin Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 pretty good but be more specific, you need to be able to know where the monsters are fused from, in the card 'Combine Strength', for example Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skydawn Posted September 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 cool cool. i'll do better next time =).. thx for the advice guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skydawn Posted September 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 cool cool. i'll do better next time =).. thx for the advice guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_magician_girl Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 needs some work but yea pretty good for a first time ^_^ 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 That's great for a first, but if you weren't a newbie, your rate would be 5.6/10. Because you're a newbie and you've made alot of effort, your rate for a newbie is 9.5/10. Great job, but here are somethings that might let you improve: There is a known Fairy-Type breed of monsters, you can't make monsters with the same species as a new Sub-Type. Angel Evolution doesn't summon the both monsters by the effect, only summons Seraphim. Make sure you read before you fully feel comfortable for the card next time. Angel Knight's image is nowhere near clear. There's some bad grammar. Keep reading Kazuki Takahashi's cards (the original cards of Yugioh) and learn the way of his writing in the card. I'm not a pro at this, but at least good, and I'm doing the same thing of learning the way of the Official Grammar. Some typos, I removed these and some of the grammar part from the Newbie score. LV not LVL. That's all, good cards ^^ I'm proud of your effort... and if you want to see my newest and bestest set just check my sig. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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