narutoloverjoey Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 They go with each other.[/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 ok thats a wierd set. but good. 5/10 as OCG errors and pics don't suit yugioh. good effort.Prince of Chaos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir nerdalot Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 dude don't act like your all kool and you know everything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 dude don't act like your all kool and you know everything u talking to me or him. cause if ya talking to me i know a hell of a lot more then you. And that i can prove Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 3.2/10 Sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 I dont like these 1 bit. A ritual monster needs a ritual spell card. Much OCG errors. You dont place tokens on cards, you place counters on cards, and tokens on fields. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted November 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 I dont like these 1 bit. A ritual monster needs a ritual spell card. Much OCG errors. You dont place tokens on cards' date=' you place counters on cards, and tokens on fields. 2/10[/quote'] geez, go easy, my FIRST FOUR CARDS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 They are good cards. but considor the advice given to you. they do that so u can improve. not to be harsh.Prince of Chaos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackpwnz Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 4/10. The pictures are cool but the effects don't really fit with a hologram theme and I don't understand why you would make it a ritual monster with no ritual spell card or even any sort of ritual involved in summoning it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Pictures are OK. Names are OK. OCG is OK. Effects is where I get iffy. You place counters, not tokens. Unless this is some new sub-type? If it is a Ritual Monster, it needs a Spell Card. Otherwise, make it an effect Monster. And as far as power goes, they are a bit too overpowered. Just by a bit. But for first cards, I would say they are really good. :D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted November 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Thnx, they were my first 4 cards . . . and yes: "Holo" cards were like a new type with diff things like Ritual without Ritual Card. But, the token/counter thing, I got my ideas all mixed up. I was thinking placing counters and placing tokens and I accidently combined the two, didn't realize that until the first reply.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 how did u realize it from my reply. i didnt state nething bout that.Prince of Chaos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted November 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 *meant I didn't see it until i got teh first reply, I looked at my cards again when you said i had some OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 ohh. glad i helped then lol.Prince of Chaos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted November 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 yeah ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoPaladin2008 Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 btw the holo token replacing thingy along with a card that places a holo token is o 2 card otk/ftk/change the second "holo token" to a "holo counter" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 I Like Them, Need Some Work, But They Shall Get There Sooner Or Later............... 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted November 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 I Like Them' date=' Need Some Work, But They Shall Get There Sooner Or Later............... 8.8/10[/quote'] thnx ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 pictures need serious improvement... i saw the 'holo' set and assumed you made holographic pictures not an indivual sub type. you dont need to make tokens... tokens can be cards, counters, pennies, paper anything. OCG need serious help... "Whenever an effect calls for the placement of a Holo..." seriously? have you seen a yugioh card before, not a single card looks like that. sorry for the critisism but you need to put a little more effeort into a card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted November 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 pictures need serious improvement... i saw the 'holo' set and assumed you made holographic pictures not an indivual sub type. you dont need to make tokens... tokens can be cards' date=' counters, pennies, paper anything. OCG need serious help... "Whenever an effect calls for the placement of a Holo..." seriously? have you seen a yugioh card before, not a single card looks like that. sorry for the critisism but you need to put a little more effeort into a card.[/quote'] yes, I have seen a yugioh card before, I have at least 2,000. No, I'm not lying either, I could list them all for you (althought I wouldn't want to.) I'm a serious collector, I've seen many Yu-Gi-Oh cards. more effort? My first four cards, I thought about those for a while! (I don't care if you don't like them, but I atleast know the rest of my cards are better.)I just made these for fun. Go into my sig and view "My Best Set," and follow the link. Tell me I don't put effort into my cards. sry, ^^ just when people say I've never seen a yugioh card before and don't put in effort i get angry. then i turn green, and that's no fun. >> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Holographic shield#Badly underrated #How do you summon it?#Too many defense points for a 1 star card #3/10Hologarphic replacement system#Good picture#Effect dosen't make sense#Whatever the effect means it looks powerful#Perhaps it should be a rare#7/10And i'll give the other two 2/108/10so altegether you got 20/40 which is alright Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted November 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 thnx, I understand about the Holographic Shield, what you mean, I no I underrated it. I kind of do that sometimes, to mess with people. Like RELINQUISHED. That card is just as underrated as Holographic Shield. Oh, and the second card's effect means: When a card effect tells you to place a Holo Token, place one on it as well. For each one on it, your opponents life points is reducde by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 I thought holo in the pictures.Nice but the deck is weird 6.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted December 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 thnx all of u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AxelJeff Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Lol cool some spelling mistakes.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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