2009Z Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n223/harmoniousdiscord/dog.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 OCG Errors beast-Beastnormal-Normalsummoned-Summonedsummoned-Special Summoned Meh Pic but 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2009Z Posted November 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 OCG errorsWork on OCGPic is okayGreat Effect7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2009Z Posted November 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Where errors? And whats OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Don't forget to give me credit for telling you how to post your cards For the new 1 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Uhhh sorryMy comment is for you first cardfor the second card, Perfect OCGGood effect8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2009Z Posted November 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 oh yeah, thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Looks too strong for lvl. 5. Raise it's level by 1 or 2 stars. Also, the effect is kinda plain. Maybe add to it. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 i like it8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dudeey Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Great Pic love the card!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 I love it. Great job for taking advice from Dylan. I like it 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 OCG isn't perfect!"This card cannot be Normal Summoned.This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Beast-Type monsters from your Deck to your Graveyard." If I've seen it well you put , instead of . And if you already started with "this card[b/]" then don't use "monster"... I would put card, but you can keep monster if you want. ;)And the last sentence - you must say from where are you sending the card to the Graveyard - it can be Deck, Extra Deck (Fusions and Synchros), hand... ;)Effect is a bit plain - just like Demented said. Try adding something original...And if you already want to put ID then to it properly - put 4 characters in the first part then EN and some numbers in the second part... Or something similar...Also, when you wrote card's Type you probably put BEAST or beast. It is supposed to be Beast. Take a look at your card and it is noticable that you made a mistake somewhere. As for now:6.5/10 Pretty nice for a new member! Well done...^___^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2009Z Posted November 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 OCG isn't perfect!"This card cannot be Normal Summoned.This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Beast-Type monsters from your Deck to your Graveyard." If I've seen it well you put ' date=' instead of . And if you already started with "this [b']card[b/]" then don't use "monster"... I would put card, but you can keep monster if you want. ;)And the last sentence - you must say from where are you sending the card to the Graveyard - it can be Deck, Extra Deck (Fusions and Synchros), hand... ;)Effect is a bit plain - just like Demented said. Try adding something original...And if you already want to put ID then to it properly - put 4 characters in the first part then EN and some numbers in the second part... Or something similar...Also, when you wrote card's Type you probably put BEAST or beast. It is supposed to be Beast. Take a look at your card and it is noticable that you made a mistake somewhere. As for now:6.5/10 Pretty nice for a new member! Well done...^___^o....k.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Should be: monsters, good pic, level raised to 7, seems good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 Raise level to 7. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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