Ira08 Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Yea I'm new here, and I've been working on some Naruto cards lately in order to give my neighbors (They're young kids) a free alternative to Yugioh. Please leave some feedback and tell me what I need to work on. These are just a few btw, I do have spells and traps but didn't post them. I may post more later, but it depends on the feedback :P. Thanks! :D Thanks again!Sure hope someone replies soon :DSure hope someone replies soon :DAw come on, they're not that bad are they? lol:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 Some of the 3000 point guys might need to have their power lowered a little. Edit out the unneeded stuff in Jiraiya's description. other than that, nice!! These are some of the best Naruto cards I've seen! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 Some of the 3000 point guys might need to have their power lowered a little. Edit out the unneeded stuff in Jiraiya's description. other than that' date=' nice!! These are some of the best Naruto cards I've seen![/quote'] Thanks for the advice and the comment, much appreciated =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 Alright so I'm posting some more of mine, hope they're good. Please rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 Okay they are pretty good cardsBut for the normal card, you can make the effect next timeA lot of the OCG errorsAnd 1 more, You should change the Ninja Type to Warrior Type or something else7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 Great job for a new member. Check your OCG. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 Here are some more, sorry about the OCG guys, I'm gonna have to leave it like that cuz those neighbor kids don't understand most of the terms in regular Yugioh, which is why I try and keep it simple. Also I tweaked the packaging code (ROTC-EN0001) to display the association of the character within each series, and the area on the mid-left (Limited edition, 1st edition, etc.) is where I put the name of the series, because this game is gonna be based on all of those kids' favorite series, so sorry if I changed it too much. Btw there are some originals snuck in there :P Anyways enjoy, and feedback is appreciated =D That's through the F's for now, more to come! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Um..........These are bad no ninja typewhat the heck is a fighter.no vannilas way way WAY Ovpd!LOOK AT THE FRIEKEN OCG THREAD PLEASEimprove your cards and i will give you a 4/10 dont put the name of the card in their own effect.put some more effort into the cards next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Um..........These are bad no ninja typewhat the heck is a fighter.no vannilas way way WAY Ovpd!LOOK AT THE FRIEKEN OCG THREAD PLEASEimprove your cards and i will give you a 4/10 dont put the name of the card in their own effect.put some more effort into the cards next time. Well like I said, I tweaked it to give to the kids, and a fighter is one who fights, look it up =P These are the stronger cards, so they should be powerful, although yea, some could use some editing, and the name of the card in the effect thing....yeaaa....I'll leave that for them XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Well a fighter is not the right way to say that its more like monster or card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darknesslover5000 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 :)I like 'em. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 :)I like 'em. Well thank you XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DuskWind05 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Their a lot better than mine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 These cards are really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Thanks for all the feedback guys, I'm posting some more that I've made beforehand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Yeah dont take my advice whatever.Fighter=Monsterninja=Warriormode=PositionLOOK AT THE OCG THREAD IN MY SIG PLEASE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Yeah dont take my advice whatever.Fighter=Monsterninja=Warriormode=PositionLOOK AT THE OCG THREAD IN MY SIG PLEASE. Listen, I love the advice, but I'm making this for kids around my block, it's not that serious for me, they understand what the point of the game is, and for the one's I printed off already, they love them. I'm not gonna make everything perfect, heck I'm not even a Yugioh fan, I'm just someone who likes making cards and it has the perfect format. Besides, base the rating off of creativity and the pics, the others seem to like it =D Lighten up, you seem so strict on the boards XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Well if your going to post your cards your going to get criticizm. So dont post your cardsand it's not creative. do you know how many of these naruto cards ive seen. so 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Well if your going to post your cards your going to get criticizm. So dont post your cardsand it's not creative. do you know how many of these naruto cards ive seen. so 4/10 I'm aware of that, I'm just not too bothered by it ;D And fair enough, 4/10 from you, thanks for your opinion XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 be creative. Vanillas are terrible. I don't care who you are making the cards for. You signed up for this site, so i ask that you respect those who are already on here, and read the OCG thread. It is not to be rude, but so that your cards can get better. Besides, I'm sure the people in your neighborhood would be much happier if you made GOOD cards, instead of mediocre ones. Ninja= WarriorMode=Position Seriously again, vanillas are a waste of space. If you aren't going to put time in to actually make effects, then why even bother making the card in the first place? Just my opinion though. So I give this set a 5/10. One word. Improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokemondragonite Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 is not that's wrong, are created by, if you want to put them in place of ninja warrior is not mandatory, this is nothing more creativity to get everyone makes it to your liking, certainly very good letters to at least if I liked my Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Colonel_Llama Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Wow, great job. The only thing I'd say would be to up Kakashi a little bit. Maybe 2300 or 2400. The second hokage as well, he should be up to at least 2700. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ssjbladez Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 100% nice cards but 1 question where did you get the naruto pics i mean there absolutely amazing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 8.3/10 Good Try! :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blanka_uwoo Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Good, but bads OCG and no exist "ninja type"=Warriorfighter=monster.Great Pics!!!! That is good! Read some real yugioh cards to correct that OCG.7/10 I like them PLEASE SEE MY STREET FIGHTER CARDS http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3935/145921vo0.jpg --- That is in the forum too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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