Are these lyrics any good?

[♫Griffinsusername♫]

My friend wrote them and plz be honest. These are his first lyrics

 

 

Don’t you just love the summer?

everything is so sweet

its just a big bummer

that now were stuck in school every week

 

now everything kids love is gone

and every day just drags along

I miss the summer

 

I never knew how boring it could be

To sit there and listen to people teach

id rather be at the pool

cause every day is so pointless at school

I miss the summer

I miss the summer yeah

 

Now theres this thing they call education

But I think its ruining our nation

Its taking away our time for play

And messing with almost every day

 

Yeah I know its an important thing

But tell me what good can it bring

I miss the summer

 

I never knew how boring it could be

To sit there and listen to people teach

id rather be at the pool

cause every day is so pointless at school

I miss the summer

I miss the summer yeah

I miss the summer

I miss the summer

 

I miss the heat

I miss the sunshine

I miss the pool

I miss all of the things that are so cool

I miss the summer

 

I think its amazing how fun it can be

To just lay around and be lazy

Now its good to know that you can be the pool

And that you are finally out of school

When it’s the summer

When it’s the summer yeah

I miss the summer

I miss the summer

I miss the summer

[Raelen]

Hardly any of the lines scan. Sorry, but not good lyrics.

Don't shoot me!:shock:

[♫Griffinsusername♫]

I understand

[ragnarok1945]

I have to hear the song to judge correctly, but as of right now they're not very good

[WindupRabbitFan14]

It's ok.