..:Grimmjow:.. Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 So this is COMPLETLY Diffrent to the original Digimon series, This has a different DigiEvolution so you mightaswell Look at this before the fanfic 1.XG Evolution = X Grand Mode / Kinda rookie but stronger 2. XM Evolution = X Mystic Mode / Kinda Champion Level also Stronger though 3. XVU Evolution = XViaUltimate, This is Ultimate Mode, Stronger better and faster 4. XMB Evolution = XMysticBeyond, Mystic mode but stronger 5. XC Evolution = If the Digimon gets to this level it shall be known as XCHAMPION Mode, Its the best mode it can go Chapter 1 Digital transportation Year= 2200 In the real world Karen: Sheiji Breakfest time!! Sheiji: Comeing Mom! Scan On Sheiji Age: 16Attitude: Headstrong, KindFavirote Food: Mac and Cheese with Ketchup Back on story As Sheiji comes down the stairs suddenly a Vortex appeard and a Black Arm took Sheiji in and toss him in that Vortex The Vortex takes Tons of Minutes to appear in the Digital World Sheiji: What the?! Gaiyumon: Sheiji Kamazaturi, you have been chosen! Scan On Gaiyumon Level: XG EvolutionType: DragonAttitude: Kinda Selfish but kind Back on the story... Sheiji: Me? for what?! Gaiyumon: For saving the Digital World Sheiji: What Do you Mean by Digital World!!!!? Gaiyumon: Its a universe where Digimon live in Paradise and Peace but it was overtaked from a DARK army who wish to take over the Universe, Theres only a few parts of the Digital world who people still live in Peace and Paradise but soon its gonna get destroyed! Sheiji: WHAT?! What can i do the save it I mean I just came here taken by you! Gaiyumon: So many things for you to learn... The Vortex landed, In the middle of Nowhere, Nothing in there except a Digimon who keeps walking back and forth Guarding the rest of the Dark Part of the Digital World. Scan On the New Digimon Name: DarkGigaMonType: BeastLevel: X Mystic ModeAttitude: Mean And Mad... Continuing on the story Sheiji and Gaiyumon smash on the ground Sheiji: Ouch! DarkGigamon turns back and has a grin DarkGigamon: Well, Well, Well if there isn't a Human Punk and a PunyWeny XG Evolution... DarkGigamon Prepares a claws from both of his hands and charges at Sheiji...DarkGigamon Attacks Gaiyumon: SHEIJI!! Gaiyumon comes on front of Sheiji and DarkGigamon attacks through Gaiyumons stomach... Sheiji's eyes shocked then a tear dropped... Gaiyumon is getting bigger and DNA comes around Sheiji and Gaiyumons body Sheiji realizes somethings in his pocket then holds a Machine then presses A Big Black Button. Sheiji: X Mystic Mode!!! Gaiyumon: Gaiyumon X Mystic Digivolve to GigaGaimon!!! Big claws appear around the whole body of Gaiyumon then he grows bigger... GigagaimonType: DragonLevel: X Mystic ModeUltimate move: Burning Blast Sheiji: GigaGaimon Now Use BURNING BLAST!! GigaGaimon: Burning Blast!! The Big fireball goes fast then charges at DarkGigamon then obliterate him to pieces... End of First Chapter How do you like it so far? 2ND CHAPTER!!~! Chapter 2!The battle between GigaGaimon and DarkGigamon is over 30 minutes after... Sheiji: So what was that all about Gaiyumon?Gaiyumon: What do you mean?Sheiji: When you saved me from being obliterated...Gaiyumon: Your the chosen one...If you die then the whole world is destroyed...Sheiji: Stop Saying that! You make it seem that Im god!!Gaiyumon laughs After Gaiyumon laughs Sheiji realizes that a girl is crying..Sheiji: Hey little Girl whats the matter?!Little Girl: My Mummy(Shes 3 years old) is gwone I dunno where she is!Sheiji: How are you even in the digital world?!Little Girl suddenly transforms to a digimon...Hayomon: Cause Im not!!! Scan on Hayomon Level: XG EvolutionPersonality: Mean, Rude consirderd a coward...Ultimate Move: Fooling anyone with a ability to transform to any Human... Scan Done (Back to story) Sheiji: What The!?Gaiyumon: Don't be scared Sheiji, this is the only thing he can do, Pretty much weak...Haymon: Don't call me WEAK!!!Hayomon attacks GaiyumonGaiyumon dosen't feel anythingGaiyumon: Is that all you got tiny?Hayomon: YOU!!!!!Gaiyumon gets a scary look to Hayomon...Haymon: EEEK!!!Hayomon runs away... Gaiyumon: So easy to threaten...Sheiji Realizes that a boomerang swang around himGaiyumon: WHAT THE HECK!?!Keinon: HUMAN!!! Scan On KeinonSorry its the same in Digital Data squad aka In my storys timeline 10 years agoScan done! Keinon: You Human(He pronuces Humon)Sheiji: You...Keinon: Me tell Marcus!!Sheiji: Who's Marcus?! End of chapter 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 Not bad for your first. I wouldn't put a line between all the text. Also explain more into depth whats going on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..:Grimmjow:.. Posted December 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 Kk, Ty!! What do you mean by line? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 When you skipped a line after someone new spoke. It was a little hard on the eyes. But I do like the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..:Grimmjow:.. Posted December 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 O...Ok When I make the 2nd season I wont uses lines on it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..:Grimmjow:.. Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 DONE! Chapter 3 soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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