-DJ- Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I worked a good amount of time on this sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chowderbalboa Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Thats really cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Problems - The render is horrible....it's wings are cut off, which ruins the sig in itself. You should have sized down the canvas to at least fit the render. - You used the sparks brush badly. It's way too out of place. - You can't see much of the background thanks to the sparks brush, but it looks bad as well, from what I can see. - No depth, flow, blending. You need some help. PM me and I can give you some tips. ;) Keep at it, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Just a render and spark brush? tryagain/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marisa Kirisame-ze Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Yes, the sparks brush should have been set to "Lighten Only" for a good effect and the render should have been made a bit smaller and more effective (or stretched out throughout the sig, its a bird after all that would look nice). Another thing is that the text ruins it, you should have used a color to blend in and a font to go with the bird. Not so good, so try again and practice a bit more. I was as bad as that, but I got better, you can too. The Crimson One,Miranda-chan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 The right and left sides of the sig ruin it. Also, the "Power Within" is placed badly over a spark of light, making it hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Disturbed that's how the original card is. - Disturbed said most of what I was gonna say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Thats really cool Problems - The render is horrible....it's wings are cut off' date=' which ruins the sig in itself. You should have sized down the canvas to at least fit the render. - You used the sparks brush badly. It's way too out of place. - You can't see much of the background thanks to the sparks brush, but it looks bad as well, from what I can see. - No depth, flow, blending. You need some help. PM me and I can give you some tips. ;) Keep at it, though.[/quote']Thanks both of you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Problems - The render is horrible....it's wings are cut off' date=' which ruins the sig in itself. You should have sized down the canvas to at least fit the render. - You used the sparks brush badly. It's way too out of place. - You can't see much of the background thanks to the sparks brush, but it looks bad as well, from what I can see. - No depth, flow, blending. You need some help. PM me and I can give you some tips. ;) Keep at it, though.[/quote'] Everyone I think Disturbed might be my illegitimate gfx son =OHe got here before me so I iz not gonna waste mah time rewriting what he said =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 It's really good 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Problems - The render is horrible....it's wings are cut off' date=' which ruins the sig in itself. You should have sized down the canvas to at least fit the render. - You used the sparks brush badly. It's way too out of place. - You can't see much of the background thanks to the sparks brush, but it looks bad as well, from what I can see. - No depth, flow, blending. You need some help. PM me and I can give you some tips. ;) Keep at it, though.[/quote'] Everyone I think Disturbed might be my illegitimate gfx son =OHe got here before me so I iz not gonna waste mah time rewriting what he said =P Agreed. Although, for someone who is still quite new to GFX, all I have to say is this. "This copy-pasta still looks unappetizing. Waiter! I will not waste my time with food that looks like it was pasted onto the plate!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Problems - The render is horrible....it's wings are cut off' date=' which ruins the sig in itself. You should have sized down the canvas to at least fit the render. - You used the sparks brush badly. It's way too out of place. - You can't see much of the background thanks to the sparks brush, but it looks bad as well, from what I can see. - No depth, flow, blending. You need some help. PM me and I can give you some tips. ;) Keep at it, though.[/quote'] Everyone I think Disturbed might be my illegitimate gfx son =OHe got here before me so I iz not gonna waste mah time rewriting what he said =P Agreed. Although, for someone who is still quite new to GFX, all I have to say is this. "This copy-pasta still looks unappetizing. Waiter! I will not waste my time with food that looks like it was pasted onto the plate!" I lol'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 It's really good 10/10 thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Bad. Looks like a stock with spark brushes all around,wait it is! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 This is pretty good. The render is a little choppy or cut off though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Bad. Looks like a stock with spark brushes all around' date='wait it is![/quote'] No it's not and wait, it's better then your work. Anyway glad you took my advice and stopped using the Gradient Maps, just use a render that isn't cut off next time ok =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkArmedDragon118 Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Bad render but keep working! 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Bad. Looks like a stock with spark brushes all around' date='wait it is![/quote'] I wouldn't be talking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldman Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Problems - The render is horrible....it's wings are cut off, which ruins the sig in itself. You should have sized down the canvas to at least fit the render. - You used the sparks brush badly. It's way too out of place. - You can't see much of the background thanks to the sparks brush, but it looks bad as well, from what I can see. - No depth, flow, blending. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Problems - The render is horrible....it's wings are cut off' date=' which ruins the sig in itself. You should have sized down the canvas to at least fit the render. - You used the sparks brush badly. It's way too out of place. - You can't see much of the background thanks to the sparks brush, but it looks bad as well, from what I can see. - No depth, flow, blending.[/quote'] I agree about the render Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 wow that is not soo good. ^^the render is cut out so you can see the lines of the render pic ^^ well i dont want to say more until that is fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 The wings are cut off >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Problems - The render is horrible....it's wings are cut off' date=' which ruins the sig in itself. You should have sized down the canvas to at least fit the render. - You used the sparks brush badly. It's way too out of place. - You can't see much of the background thanks to the sparks brush, but it looks bad as well, from what I can see. - No depth, flow, blending.[/quote'] THAT'S NOT COOL! Dude, you copied my post, word for word. THAT IS NOT COOL! Especially when none of that is stuff you can do either. (No offense, but it's true) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 okay this is geting out of hand MODS LOCK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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