Jace Beleren Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 This is my Dark warriors cards that i made plz rate/fix/ideas/comment Dark-Servant If you Tribute Summon a DARK monster,you can treat this monsteras 2 Tribute Monsters for the Tribute Summon Dark Lady-Melfina If this card attacks,your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step Ministry Of Darkness Each time damage,except Battle Damage,is inflicted to your opponent's Life Points,inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points Dark Lady-Cassandra When this card is Normal Summoned succesfully,no Trap Cards can be activated Dark Lady-Sophitia Increase the ATK of this monster by 200 for each monster on your side of the field that includes "Dark-Lady" in its card Rise OF Darkness Select 1 Monster Card that includes "Dark-Lady in its card name from your Graveyard and Special Summon it Dark Lady-Maria If a monster that battles with this monster is a Spellcaster or Fiend-Type monster,destroy that monster at the end of the Damage Step Gates Of Hell Increase the ATK of all Warrior-Type monster by 700,decrease the ATK of all Spellcaster-Type by 500 Largo-The Master Of Assasination When this card is sent from your hand or Deck to your Graveyard by your opponent's card effect,Special Summon this card to the field Fiona-The FIRE Mage FLIP: Take control of 1 FIRE monster on your opponent's side of the field, for as long this card remains face-up on the field Evil Twins Of Darkness When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you can Special Summon any "Dark Lady" on its name from your Deck to the field. then shuffle your Deck Fields Of Hope Increase the ATK of all Spellcaster-Type monster by 700,decrease the ATK of all Fiend-Type by 500 Dark Lady-Chizuru This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 "Dark Lady-Sophitia" on your side of the field from play, when this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by your Opponent card effect,you can Special summon 1 "Dark Lady-Sophitia" from your Graveyard to your side of the field. Dark Assembly Remove 2 Spell Counters on your side of the field to Special Summon "Dark Lady-Sophitia" or "Dark Lady-Melfina" from your Graveyard to your side of the field Dark Lady-Himiko This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 "Dark Lady-Maria" on your side of the field from play,This card gains 300 ATK points for each monster on your Graveyard that has "Dark Lady" on its name Fallen Angel-Seimei You can flip this card into face-down Defense Postion once per turn during your Main Phase, When you Flip Summon this card succesfully, destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on your opponent side of the field Fallen Angel-Judith You can flip this card into face-down Defense Postion once per turn during your Main Phase, When you Flip Summon this card succesfully, Add 2 Spell Counters on this card Dark Lady-Kosmos Once per turn during your Main Phase you can discard 1 card from your hand to return 1 Flip Effect Monster from your Graveyard to your Deck Dark Lady-Vesperia When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, your opponent draw 2 cards from his Deck Dark Lady-Ritsuka Negate the effect of an Effect Monster that is destroyed by this card as a result of battle Lunatic Fox-Tsukihime Flip: add 1 Level 4 or less monster that includes "Dark Lady" on its name from your Deck to your hand Purity Of The Darkness Inflict 500 damage of your opponent's Life Points each time your opponent draws a card Dark Lady-Rozalin When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, your oponent discards 1 random card from their hand Dark Lady-Yukina This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. this card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Dark Lady - Himiko." The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the number of "Dark Lady" monsters from your Graveyard by x500 points Mysterious Beyond Discard 2 Monster from your hand that has "Dark Lady" on its nameto Negate the effect of an Effect Monster Dark Lady-Gothica This card cannot be normal Summoned or Set,this card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Dark Lady-Chizuru"from your side of the field to the Graveyard,pay half of your Life Points to destroy all the cards in your Opponent's side of the field,this effect can be used only once per duel Maiden Of Lonliness When this card is Normal Summoned Succesfully you can add 2 Spell Counters on this card,you can remove 2 Spell Counters from this card to add 1 "Dark Lady-Chizuru" from your Deck to your hand Maiden Of The Lost Wind When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned Succesfully,destroy 2 Spell or Trap card from your opponent side of the field Fallen Angel-Love Less You can flip this card into face-down Defense Postion once per turn during your Main Phase, When you Flip Summon this card succesfully, Add 2 Spell Counters (2 max) on this card, you can remove 2 Spell Counters from this card to destroy 1 monster from your opponent's field The Unholy Wedding Remove all Spell Counters on your field to destroy all the monsters on your opponent side of the field Dark Lady-Neko When this card destroys your opponent monster as result of battle,Remove that monster from play Soul Destroyer As long this card remains face-up on the field,when your monsters that have "Dark Lady" on its name destroys your opponent's monster as Result of Battle,that monster is removed from Play,for each monster is removed from play you can Draw 1 card Second Chance When your monster that has "Dark Lady" on its name on your field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard,you can Special Summon 1 monster from your hand to the field that has "Dark Lady" on its name lower level than the destroyed monster All pics credit from Deviantart AND Googleplz comment and rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 its been 24 hour and still no one has leaved a single comment plz comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 The pics are very good. The OCG is pretty much great. The problem is, a lack of orginality. Almost all these effects seem to be taken straight from other cards. No offence intended, just pointing that out. Also, these effects are very simple. To boost your score in the future try to be more unique. For your effort, your OCG, and the pics, I'll give you a score of 6/10. Also, one other thing I noticed on your Ministry Of Darkness, the effect is a bit off. I could be wrong here, but, it reads "Each time damage,except Battle Damage,is inflicted to your opponent's Life Points,inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points" which would make it to where that card does the 200 points of damage, than the effect kicks in and does 200 more points, and so on. I would suggest changing it to read, "Each time damage is inflicted to your opponent's, except Battle Damage and damage inflicted by this effect, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points" or something like that.Also, your art credit is off. You should post the name of the person who you got the art from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 thanx 4 the advice by the way i am old school yugioh player for a very long time and its been a while since the last time i playedso i wrote the card effect as same my old deck and its not taken from other cards its just that i remmembered some effect of the cards in my old deck and also the pics are from devaintart from different artist so i cannot put all of them hereany other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 ocg errorsexact same old effectseffects doesnt match with picssome bad pics 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Too original... =/ Some pics are from DeviantART, remove them. Increase the ATK of this monster by 200 for each monster on your side of the field that includes "Dark-Lady" in its [bname.[/b] Dots at the end, and not like this: I like it,because,well,I just like it Like this:I like it, because, well, I just like it. See? 7/10 P.S: I wash harsh to improve your skills... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 thanx 4 your opinioni will try 2 improve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Wow all the pics are nice some of them lack BG's but nice choices OCG looks good 8.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 thanx but i must improve until i make the perfect cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Just train hard.... That's what I did... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 2 new cards has been addedcome on guys support me with your commentsand ratings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 The cards are good....maeby Fanfic material....But...dark ladys should have more themed effects so they would work as an archetype...the idea is good afterall....XD8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 thanx dudei will add more cards daily so i can complete my dark lady setu deserve a repany other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Not bad I have to say. 8/10 Simple ocg problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 I'd, personally, change the name of the archetype to "Dark Maiden" rather than "Dark Lady" Idea isn't too bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 its true i was running out of names i will try to fix those errors later on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Well good OCG, and some good pic, though the effects are pretty simple, 7.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 thanx spire2 more cards has been added anyone who enter this thread at least leave a comment with rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nnoitra Jiruga Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 minor OCG and need more different effects.8.6/10pretty nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 I like your new cards alot. 8/10. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 therye ok.you entered the effect in the 1st card.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 all i can say is, boring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 thanx guys for your opinions now new cards has been addedi wanna see more comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 I like a lot of the images that you used. OCG errors have been pointed out and as stated before I think some of the cards lack a certain originality. However they are still good cards as the effects used are still very good. Again use effects that 'make' them all work together.8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 u got a point thanx 4 the advice i will try 2 fix them as soon as possible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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