Goldeneagle Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Effect: 'Elemental Hero Captain Gold' + 'Elemental Hero Burstinitrix' + 'Elemental Hero Sparkman'This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every 'Elemental Hero' on the field and in your Graveyard. This card is unaffected by your opponent's Spell &Trap cards. Once per turn, select a face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field, increase this monster's ATK by half of the selected monster's DEF. During the End Phase of the turn in which you used this effect, decrease the ATK of this card by double the ATK it gained this turn. When this card attacks another monster, inflict damage equal to half its original ATK to your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 i'm not even gonna try to fix that OCG. It's just so bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Cool, not bad. I used to destroy everyone with E-Heros!!! Now I live off of Spellcasters since I got creamed in a tournament. I would definitly use it if it were real!!!:DNow for the negs.End Phaseunaffected.Elemental Hero Burstinatrix. Not Burstinitrix.Good job!!! 9.8/10. I didn't really see any other OCG. But hey, i ain't an OCG master. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldeneagle Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 i'm not even gonna try to fix that OCG. It's just so bad.Isn't there a whole topic done by a mod telling you to do positive criticism? :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Are you talkin' to the other dude? You probably are, but this is under mine, and with no quote, so I dunno. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Isn't there a whole topic done by a mod telling you to do positive criticism? :( Isn't there a whole topic done by a mod telling you how OCG should be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Skuldur, yes there is, goldeneagle looks like he read it. But it is VERY confusing (to me i dunno 'bout anyone else). Please do NOT start a fight here. Take it to some other place, ya know maybe a Private Messaging thingy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldeneagle Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Yeah. If you're going to be negative, can you at least show me what I did wrong so I can improve it.And yes crazymanguy, I was talking to the other dude, it's just that our posts were like 10 seconds apart so u posted while I was writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scorch848 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Nice card!!!love the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldeneagle Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Thx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Good pic, might go better with Flame Wingman...Some OCG errors, but overall, well done! 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldeneagle Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Thanks! There were just so many E.Heroes to choose from for the fusion material. I could have used captain gold, for example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every 'Elemental Hero' on the field and in your Graveyard. This card is unaffected by your opponent's Spell &Trap cards. Once per turn, select a face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field, increase this monster's ATK by half of the selected monster's DEF. During the End Phase of the turn in which you used this effect, decrease the ATK of this card by double the ATK it gained this turn. When this card attacks another monster, inflict damage equal to half its original ATK to your opponent. fix'd most of the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 *OVERLOAD! TOO MANY ERRORS!* This card can destroy all monsters and cannot be destroyed by spells and traps?! Dear god, what were you thinking? PLUS it gain ATK from monsters in the grave and still get more from your opponent AND hurt your opponent's lifepoints. This is like a whole burn deck in one monster! EPIC FAIL. Score: -infinite/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Ever heard of a last resort card, xzMasteRzx? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dominantruler007 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 awesome pic 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Lol, good point Crazymanguy4. Okay, i change my rating. Score: 7.7/10 Thats as high as I'm goin'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Exactly, some times you just gotta use a powerful card, even if it'll burn you up. :lol::lol::lol: lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 ROFL! Very good point. Now I'm happy again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Exactly. Goldeneagle, keep up the good work!!! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Pic is Meh, lots of errors 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Lower Level to 8, good pic, try to remove the lettering in the upper corner, lower case field, Spell or Trap cards, select 1 face-up, remove the comma after field, If you use this effect, during the End Phase, take out another monster, change deal to inflict. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldeneagle Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Thanks everyone for your help, comments and compliments. I've made some serious changes to the ocg, thanks skuldur, and i'll try to get the lettering off on GIMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 I like it. The only suggestion I would make is maybe change the Fusion Material Monsters; replace Bladeedge with Captain Gold. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Unoriginal to the max. It's just ATK gain after ATK gain, nothing else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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