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Aquatuis the Cryztalised Dragon {My best effect yet}


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[spoiler=Christmas]Since today is Christmas Eve I figure I should make a special card for the season. I'd like to wish everyone here a Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays, Have Fun and Eat Alot lol!!!

 

 

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Card Fixed!!!

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Special Summoned by its own effect. This card can be Special Summoned by sending 5 Aqua-Type monsters from your field or hand to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the number of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x200. During your Draw Phase, before you draw, you can flip a coin and call it, if you call it right, add 1 "Umi" from your Deck to your hand. Your Deck is then shuffled. If you call it wrong, skip your Draw Phase. When this card inflicts Battle Damage you can discard 3 cards from your hand to increase the damage by 1000 and treat the Battle Damage as Effect Damage.

 

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This card can only be Special Summoned by its own effect. This card can be Special Summoned by sending 5 Aqua Type monsters from your hand or field to the Graveyard. During your Draw Phase before you draw you can toss a coin and call it, if you called it correctly add 1 "Umi" card from your Deck to your hand, if you called it wrong skip your Draw Phase. When this card inflicts Battle Damage you can discard 3 cards to increase the damage by 1000 and treat the Battle Damage as Effect Damage. This card's ATK is equal to the number of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x200.

 

I'm not sure about the coin thing so you might have to check that with someone. Other than that OCG is good and the effect is fine

8.7/10

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This card can only be Special Summoned by its own effect. This card can be Special Summoned by sending 5 Aqua-Type monsters from your field or hand to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the number of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x200. During your Draw Phase' date=' before you draw, you can flip a coin and call it, if you call it right, add 1 "Umi" from your Deck to your hand. Your Deck is then shuffled. If you call it wrong, skip your Draw Phase. When this card inflicts Battle Damage you can discard 3 cards from your hand to increase the damage by 1000 and treat the Battle Damage as Effect Damage.

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Fixed.

 

Pic is a little bit used.

 

8/10

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This card can only be Special Summoned by its own effect. This card can be Special Summoned by sending 5 Aqua-Type monsters from your field or hand to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the number of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x200. During your Draw Phase' date=' before you draw, you can flip a coin and call it, if you call it right, add 1 "Umi" from your Deck to your hand. Your Deck is then shuffled. If you call it wrong, skip your Draw Phase. When this card inflicts Battle Damage you can discard 3 cards from your hand to increase the damage by 1000 and treat the Battle Damage as Effect Damage.

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Fixed.

 

Pic is a little bit used.

 

8/10

 

Thanks Demented I know about the pic considering I've used it once myself but thought that I could make a better effect to go with it, I also made it holo and some color changes. And thanks for the fixes.

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awesome effect' date=' and very unique and obviously well thought out.

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This post makes me laugh. Hard.

 

CrimsonWolf's corrections are wrongedy-wrong-wrong. This is how it should really be:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 5 Aqua-Type monsters from your hand or the field to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF become equal to the number of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x 200. During your Draw Phase, before you draw, you can flip a coin and call it. If you call it right, add 1 "Umi" from your Deck to your hand. If you call it wrong, your Draw Phase ends. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, you can discard 3 cards from your hand to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. All Battle Damage this card inflicts to your opponent is treated as Effect Damage.

 

As far as playability goes, it's completely worthless. There are almost no good Aqua-Type monsters in existence, and even if there were, 5 is a bit steep for a 1000-ATK beatstick with the ability to increase its ATK and damage. Hell, this thing would even be worthless if you could just send a card from your Deck to the Graveyard to Summon it, outside some crappy Dark World Deck. This thing eats your hand waaay too quickly, and it's almost impossible to keep alive; frankly, it ranks as one of the least playable cards since Theinen the Great Sphinx.

 

Originality... meh. I've used that pic, but it en't really overused. The effect is so bland, however, that it plummets the originality to scarce amounts. Simple beatsticks just don't cut it.

 

FINAL RATING: 23.3%

NOTE: OCG was left ungraded.

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heres how i would of word the effect:

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card from your hand by sending 5 Aqua-Type monsters from your hand or field to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the number of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x200. During your Draw Phase, before you draw, you can toss a coin and call it. If you called it correctly, add 1 "Umi" card from your Deck to your hand. If you called it wrong, skip your Draw Phase. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, you can discard 3 cards to increase the damage by 1000 and treat the Battle Damage as an Effect Damage.

 

its rather nice and useful for a water deck. 8/10

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