destiny warrior Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 i like dark worlds and i collect them, so are these guys good?? :D:D:D http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/1751/130830br1.jpg http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/4138/130830sp8.jpg http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7852/130830up1.jpg ok, shouldn't it be the picture there??? how do i copy the card?? i generated picture and copied the url. ????????????????????' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eowindil Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 just press on your cards in yugi maker and a code will appear below it copy that code into the topic and the image should appear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 i like dark worlds and i collect them' date=' so are these guys good?? :D:D:D [img']http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/1751/130830br1.jpg[/img] ok, shouldn't it be the picture there??? how do i copy the card?? i generated picture and copied the url. ????????????????????' Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destiny warrior Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 WHOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAA: [align=center]Hurre, Demon of Dark World Kerhi, Dark Knight of Dark World Norgg, Great Warrior of Dark World [/align] is it ok?? now i'm gonna make some spell and traps and maby one more monster.does anyone know from where can i get cool picz?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiko-San Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 i think hure is a bit overpowered, but the other ones are okay 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KnT Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Haha, The Lich King :pNice job. Maybe change 'destroy all monster cards the on your opponent's side of the field' --> 'destroy all monsters your opponent controls'. (same goes for 'all spell and trap cards') Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destiny warrior Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 is it better now?? i made an spell and an trap card: are they good?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitzkrieg98 Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Dark World Monsters, eh? I have actually gotten to know the quirks and dueling abilities of these unique - somewhat short-lived- cards. Hmm... On to the ratings: Names: (Isn't the "Dark World" archetype based on different colors? "Broww, Huntsman of Dark World", "Sillva, Warlord of Dark World" and "Gren, Tactician of Dark World" are puns of the colors Brown, Silver and Green respectively and just to name a select few. "Zure, Knight of Dark World", a Normal Monster, is a pun on Azure. Also, "Demon of Dark World"...is a little redundant on naming for all "Dark World" monsters are Fiend-Types and harbor a demonic appearance.) Grammar: 7.0/10 (I do like most of the grammar, but there are certain errors I have spotted. Usually the term "Monster Cards" are not used too common on a card. When it comes to Effect Monsters with an effect that goes right for the throat of monsters, they simply say "monsters" rather than "Monster Cards". Also, for..."Hroww, Demon of Dark World", "Special Summon this card to the field." is simply "Special Summon it." and "If it is Special Summoned in that way," should be "If this card was Special Summoned this way,". "Dark Mirror": "Destroy the attacking monster and add this" should be "Destroy the attacking monster, then add this". "on your opponent's side of the field" is "your opponent controls". Finally, for "Domination of Dark", "You can only activate this card when" should be "Activate only when" and "from your Graveyard to your side of the field" should leave "to your side of the field" out entirely.)---Capitalization: (Certain terms need to be capitalized. "Graveyard" is capitalized, "Spell Card", "Trap Card" and their plural forms are capitalized, even when "Spell" does not have the "Card" following. "Deck" is also capitalized. "Special Summon" and "Summon" are both capitalized. What you did get right is "card(s)" and "monster(s)" unless it is "Effect Monster", just for future reference.)---Other Errors: (You misspelled "Dark Mirror" and, unless it was intentional, "Domination of Dark" should be either "Domination of the Dark" or "Domination of Dark World". For "Dark Mirror", "an "Dark World" monster" should be "a "Dark World" monster" and "sending it to Graveyard" should be "sending it to the Graveyard".) Effects: 5.5/10 (Even with certain revisions, the cards you show are very overpowered and some of them are not unique. "Kerhi" and "Norgg" makes "Gren", "Kahkki" and "Reign-Beaux" seem like mere playthings. "Domination of Dark" is overly powered in the fact that if an opponent does so much as Summons a 1500 ATK + monster you completely crowd the field with potential beatsticks. "Dark Mirror" seems to be a cheaper, Counter Trap version of "Sakuretsu Armor". "Hroww's" effect is still overpowered..." Copyrights and Set Debuts: (This won't affect your score, but I noticed the set you have the cards on is "EEN-EN", which is the booster set "Elemental Energy". Also, I do respect that you are giving credit to Kazuki Takahashi [even though you did misspell his name], but these are YOUR cards. Give yourself some credit for creating some cards/card ideas.) Overall: 5.75/10 (I personally don't like how these came out, errors were incredibly evident and [as an unrelated issue] it didn't do so much to revive the grand name of the Dark World. If you want, though, I could definitely help you out on any future card ideas or "Dark World" cards you are planning to release. It would be my pleasure to help you if you would like.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 They are overpowered,bad ocg,and so I will give you an 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Quatrario Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 uhhhh. yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMOTSS Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 they have good effects but the Magic is overpowered, and you have bad OCG and grammar errors in them... but otherwise I give it a 7-8/10 I used to have a Dark World Deck myself... pretty good... but I run Tele-Samurai now xDDDDD like 20 times faster than Dark World, but I still like Dark World for the effects of the cards and the support cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
card knight Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 nice cards man and good picture's i have two arthas on soem of my cards do you have more cool cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMOTSS Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 O.o I made a Dark World card 2 but I didn't save it so i can't change it... plus it isn't made correctly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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