Sora Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Yes I know,i'm aware i have fake types so please don't sash me for it.So here are some of the naruto cards i created. Basically the cards revolve around the team to support eachother. So please comment and give feedback because I want to make some good naruto cards!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 they are okay5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Hey guys,i got some more cards.These guys are more unique ^_^ Hope you guys enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Meh. Work on your OCG, and they might be okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 the ocg is terrible take a look at the OCG help thread, pics are ok may get better ones, and the effects are horrible make longer more thought ones to make the overall cards better 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 the ocg is terrible take a look at the OCG help thread' date=' pics are ok may get better ones, and the effects are horrible make longer more thought ones to make the overall cards better 6/10[/quote'] Um where is the OCG thread for helping people like me?I can't find it >.< I want to become a YCM naruto pro >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Summoned.Normal SummonedATKYou not only have OCG errors, but 2nd grade grammical errors.Image Credit is needed.Edit your first post.The effects are all the same, "increase the ATK of this card by xxx if "xxx" is on the field."Fake types are terrible and unoriginal.Jounin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 These are actually pretty good. Yeah yeah, fake types, bad OCG, I know. But still, I like em'. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 in your second setthe ocg needs to be improved and you should use better pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wigggles Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 I like your cards, the OCG may be off, but practice makes perfect. Also im not ganna nag about your pictures but i have seen better pictures for these cards, but the pics are fine as they are ^.^ I don't nag about fake types, I use them aswell because it suits the card in the anime that its in. As my final evaluation I give you a 7/10. Good luck on any cards you make in the future. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Summoned.Normal SummonedATKYou not only have OCG errors' date=' but 2nd grade grammical errors.Image Credit is needed.Edit your first post.The effects are all the same, "increase the ATK of this card by xxx if "xxx" is on the field."Fake types are terrible and unoriginal.Jo[b']u[/b]nin. I have to capitalize them too?And i'm not spelling it "Jounin",i'm using the spelling from naruto.wikia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vilkas89 Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Cool Cards Make More PLZ :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 You need to work in your OCG and use better pics for "Sharingan" and "Team 7" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jackpham102 Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Nice ....Another Naruto Fan :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Summoned.Normal SummonedATKYou not only have OCG errors' date=' but 2nd grade grammical errors.Image Credit is needed.Edit your first post.The effects are all the same, "increase the ATK of this card by xxx if "xxx" is on the field."Fake types are terrible and unoriginal.Jo[b']u[/b]nin. I have to capitalize them too?And i'm not spelling it "Jounin",i'm using the spelling from naruto.wikia.com Yep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strikenmist Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Pretty good 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted January 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Hey guys i made some edits,just tell me if they are good or bad and what is needed to be edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuu The Seventh Samurai Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 These r really good dont worry about the fake types thing everyon uses them ur supposed to make ur own cards not stick to what the original types r pics r cool 2Dont worry about the fake types every1 uses them. ur cards r awesome 8/10 ocg needs some work but mine does 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Just some things that need capitalizing. (Special Summon, Deck, ATK, DEF, etc.) They're... ok. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 *sighs very big* It doesn't surprise me in the least...after all I haven't seen a decent Kimimaro card ever...No one has appreciation for the side villains that could have killed pretty much all the main people. Look at it this way If Rock Lee never showed up...Naruto= Dead If Garra never showed up...Rock Lee= Dead If Kimimaro didn't have that stupid disease...Garra= DEAD! Never the less. These are great cards for your first time here. Keep up the good work and try to make so kick as* cards.... [emotions]big sigh[/emotion] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 You put a space after a comma (,). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 ATKDeckGraveyardSpecial Summon Very Common mistakes, and you need artist credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted January 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 *sighs very big* It doesn't surprise me in the least...after all I haven't seen a decent Kimimaro card ever...No one has appreciation for the side villains that could have killed pretty much all the main people. Look at it this way If Rock Lee never showed up...Naruto= Dead If Garra never showed up...Rock Lee= Dead If Kimimaro didn't have that stupid disease...Garra= DEAD! Never the less. These are great cards for your first time here. Keep up the good work and try to make so kick as* cards.... [emotions]big sigh[/emotion] Yeah i got a bunch of other cards that i'm still editting,and kimimaro is 1 of them,but i can't come up with a good effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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