Tsukiyomi Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 1. Use Real Types2. Make the individual members. There are a lot of Akatsuki cards here, so if you wanna get good ratings, you have to put more effort into it. 3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsukiyomi Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 I did, but I had some problems uploading the rest on Image shack :(But I do promise I'll post the rest as soon as I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 I'll rate it once you post the rest of the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsukiyomi Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Here is another one I managed to upload but didn't post earlier.I thought it was overpowered so I didn't think it'd be a good idea to post it. But then again, considering the requirements are pretty strict.. well.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Lower the star level, and give it an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsukiyomi Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~/Coolio Prime\~ Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Make it easier to summon. It's not possible to have more than 5 cards on your field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsukiyomi Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 How about..? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Better. But it should remove them from play out of your Graveyard, since you can't really offer them as tribute if they're in the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsukiyomi Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~/Coolio Prime\~ Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 No, still bad. And now you're not even using the proper ritual format. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsukiyomi Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Really? Well um.. what mistakes are there?No need to point out these are my first cards :lol: I tried to transcribe most of that from the real cards :? But it seems I did something wrong somewhere. So, if it's not too much to ask. Can you advice me a bit? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Try looking at real Ritual Cards. That should help. =) There are a lot of members on the site that could correct your OCG for you if you ask them. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Edit your first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 when you make more cards, edit your first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsukiyomi Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Will do :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wigggles Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Well i like the Akatsuki, but you may need to improve on the pic that your using for the "Akatsuki Clan", the format for the ritual is simple to understand if you look at a Yu-gi-oh ritual monster. The OCG is a little off but its fine enough for me lol But other than that i like it. For my final evaluation i give you a 8/10. Good luck on future cards. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 You have a little error in your ritual spell card: graveyard = Graveyard. Fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~/Coolio Prime\~ Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Really? Well um.. what mistakes are there?No need to point out these are my first cards :lol: I tried to transcribe most of that from the real cards :? But it seems I did something wrong somewhere. So' date=' if it's not too much to ask. Can you advice me a bit? :)[/quote']Well, Ritual Spell cards Special Summon one monster only, though there are some rituals that have more than one monster you can summon with it(you choose 1 of them, not both). To Special Summon a Ritual Monster, you have the Ritual Monster and Ritual Card in your hand. Then, you activate the Ritual Card, and send monsters from your hand or field to the graveyard whose stars are equal to or greater than the stars of a certain amount. Rituals don't have specific monsters you must tribute. So, the best way to go with this would be to make individual Akatsuki cards that can all be Summoned by the effect of a single Akatsuki ritual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nnoitra Jiruga Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 minor OCG mistakes bu they are kinda good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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