hamcha Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 credits:Pic1: http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/6853/angel27do.jpg2: http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c70/Xenoith/Anime/AnimeDarkAngel2.jpg3: http://www.sfprincess.com/Rozen%20Maiden%20-%20Dark%20Angel.jpg4: http://childofmana.tripod.com/dark_angel_db3-3.jpg5: http://www.animeforum.com/uploads/dark_fairy.jpg6: http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g312/MatiasCardinal/anime26.jpg Effect:When Summoned, destroy all monsters on your opponents field. For all non "Fiend and Spellcaster" type destroyed, you take 600 damage. For every DARK monster destroyed, this card gains 600 ATK and the controller of this card gains 600 Life Points. how's this pic for the 1st card? Effect:This card cannot be normal summon or set, this card can only be special summon by tributing 1 "Harpies Lady Sisters. When this card s summoned, add 1 card with "Harpies" in it name from your Deck to your hand or add 1 "Fiend" type from your graveyard to your hand. Effect:As long as this card remains face up on the field, your opponent's monster loses 600 ATK. When their ATK becomes 0, removed the monster from play instead of sending it to your graveyard. Effect:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsterWhen a Spell or Trap card is activated, or the effect of an effect monster is activated, that activation is negated, either this card loses 500 ATK or discard 1 card from your hand. Effect:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-TunerWhen Synchro summon, increase this cards ATK by 50 for every monster in both players graveyard. Send this card to the graveyard if its ATK is 4000 or over. Effect:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-TunerWhen summoned, add 1 "Seal of Orichalcos" from your deck to your hand. As long as this car remains face up on the field, increase all "Dark" monsters ATK and DEF by 1000. Effect: When summoned, decrease all "spellcasters" ATK by 700 and increase all "Fiends" ATK by 700. As long as this card remains face up on the field, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 "Fairy" on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Correct OCG When this card is Summoned, destroy all monsters your opponent controls. For each monster destroyed by this effect, inflict 600 points of damage to your Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~UNHOLY_PHOENIX~ Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Umm...how is this a fiend?? The picture does no justice to the name and type, and makes no sense AT ALL. It seems a little weak to be 7-star. I know that you are going for a negative to counterbalance the effect, but don't underpower it too much. I'd go with at least 2200 for ATK, maybe at most 2400, and 1900-2200 for DEF. The effect is unusual, but helpful. However, since it can be both Normal and Special Summoned, it isn't negeatively balanced enough. You can destroy LOTS of opponent's monsters this way. I'd give it a summoning restriction as well. Like i said, the biggest issue is that pic. I just don't see it; sorry, but it's true. I see all OCG errors fixed by sasuke, so take his advice there.Overall, it isn't too bad. raise it's strength, find a new pic, and restrict the effect more, and it'll be quite a card and nice way to start a set. Until then: 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Underpowered, IMO. Increase the ATK to 2100 or summing. Name is bad. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Misstress Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Terrible card is terrible7 stars?!crap effectterrible ocgbad picturedoesnt match lrn2cardmake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Correct OCG When this card is Summoned' date=' destroy all monsters your opponent controls.You lose 600 Life Points for each monster destroyed by this effect.[/quote'] Fixed. give it some negative positive effects. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Bad OCG, as was explained -1Bad Effect -1Bad Pic -1Bad Name -1Spelling is Good +1Extra -'s: 0Extra +'s: 01/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hamcha Posted January 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 here is the new remade one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hamcha Posted January 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 bumppls rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hamcha Posted January 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 here's an update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JinKazama Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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