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Dragon In The Smoke


jeje

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ocg has already been corrected

 

but this needs a background, im sorry, but the pic overall is kinda boring. Its just a couple of coloured lines in the middle. I think you could get something better. Also, take out the black border.

 

i would say 5/10

 

Just keep making cards and looking at feedback and you will soon get better

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So many OCG errors, so many... 3/10 sorry. The correct effect should be, "Tribute 1 FIRE monster on your side of the field and 1 Dragon-type monster on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 level 8 Dragon-type monster from your hand, deck, or graveyard." If you like me correcting it. Try getting a better pic, too.

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First of all, the pic is horrible. There's also a border in it. It has got no BG.

 

The card is really simple, and tributing FIRE monster hasn't got anything to do with dragons even though they spit fire.

 

Your OCG is also pretty bad.

 

Tribute 1 FIRE monster and 1 Dragon-Type monster you control to Special Summon 1 Level 8 Dragon-Type monster from Deck, hand or Graveyard.

 

- GD

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