rokusho87 Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 The following cards are made base on the series Shakugan No Shana.All images used in my cards are from the anime of the series or google. After many complaints about using Fake-Type, I redid every cards to fix the OCG and change the Fake-Type into Sub-Type. Something went horribly wrong during an update and I lost every on this post. Going to try to re-upload everything, which will take a couple of days. [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Spells] [spoiler=Traps] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesshi Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 Besides the obvious fake types.. I think every card in there is Gooooood Sooo nice job... 9.10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marisa Kirisame-ze Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 YAY! Another Shakugan no Shana fan! You can tell I'm a fan with my username. ;) Alright. Well, Shana is my favorite character and she is very much like me, so to make Shana truly have the glory she should, don't put the title like that. Change it to "Shana - The Flame Haired, Burning Eyed Hunter." Don't put it the other way around. The picture is also kinda bad. I can find SOOOO many better pictures then that, that wil accually make Shana look like a great card. Find a picture not from screenshots, but from wallpapers or the one in your sig works nicely if Yuji wasn't there. Hmm, your OCG is ok. Not great, not good, not bad, but ok. Think more about your effects and make them more of your own imagination nad creation instead of simple effects like that, besides that its all good. Nice work. ^-^ I'd like to talk to ya some time like two fans of an anime talking about the anime. lol. The Crimson One,Mirand-chan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 Added "Doll Marian" and "Friagne - The Hunter".Oh, and Fire Haze (Mirand-chan) thanks for the suggestion of changing "Flame-Haired Burning-Eyed Hunter - Shana" to "Shana - The Flame-Haired Burning-Eyed Hunter". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack781217 Posted January 9, 2009 Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 Shana's effect is good for gameplay, but being able to remove monsters and increase her ATK doesn't sound right for Flame Haze...(more fit for Rinne, Tomogara, and Ou) I like your Friagne's Hougu-reaching ability (hopefully it doesn't turn out to be too powerful...but up to 3 per turn...sweet :lol: ) Regular Sharp is a killer. :shock: Good to have that "no direct attack" line [spoiler=side story]It so happens that I am making cards of Shakugan no Shana too...guess I'll post my cards in another thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 Added "Hougu - Bubble Loot" and "Hougu - Fortune Roulette".And thanks jack781217, for the comment and mentioning Shana's effect, going to need to change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack781217 Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 As you know, Fortune Roulette is supposed to only works on Flame Haze...though that would render this card completely useless unless dueling another Shakugan no Shana deck The type on your first four Rinne is spelled wrong, I think. Talking about type...I just read a thread concerning fake type and sub type...(and Mirand-chan's post in that thread) here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-90111.html Think it would be better if you have them all in Pyro-/Warrior-Type and then subtype them accordingly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 no fake types, minor OCG errors 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 Added "Hougu - Haridan" and "Hougu - Royal Ball". (Yes, it is Royal Ball, not Bell)Thanks again jack781217, for pointing out the spelling in "Rennie" and "Rinne" in the cards. The first one is the English version and the second one is the Japanese, going the the Japanese one sounds better. And your right about Fortune Roulette only works on Flame Haze, so to balance the card I change increase ATK to decrease ATK. Is that better? Regarding using the fake types, I'm still not really what to do about it. I think it is fine to leave it as it is, though I could be wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2009 Added "Marjorie Doe - The Interpreter of Condolence", "Toga - The Flame Robe", and "Hougu - Azur". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack781217 Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 It should be "Azure" @@"But does "Equip Trap" exist? I like the effects of Marjorie and Toga. So far, all the pictures of your monster cards have a dark crimson background. Wonder if it is possible to keep it like that all the way, because that would look really cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Added "Rammie - The Corpse Retriever" and "Unrestricted Spell - Fuzetsu". Yes, there are Equip Trap, example of real cards are "Kunai with Chain", "Metalmorph", and "Rare Metalmorph". The reason most of the pictures have a crimson shading to it is because my pictures are from the anime and most of the good pictures are of them inside a fuzetsu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack781217 Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 Rammie is not divine-beast @@" I know those Trap Card can be equipped to monsters. But they are either Normal Trap or Continuous Trap. None of them has the "equip" symbol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Oops, accidentally check marked the Divine button when making Rammie's card. Thanks for telling me jack781217. I have the actual card of "Metalmorph" and it has a Equip Symbol, though mine might be a old version. (or a misprint) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Added "Stray Rinne" and "Hougu - Orgel". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Added "Pinion" and "Unrestricted Spell - Cradle Garden". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Added "Sorath - The Aizenji" and "Tiriel - The Aizenta".For those who are wondering, Aizenji means "he who loves himself" and Aizenta means "she who loves him". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Added "Shiro" and "Merihim - The Rainbow Wings". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 -Pics are good-Effects seem okay-I Can't find any OCG Errors -Tiger's Overall Rating: 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Added "Tenmoku Ikko" and "Tendou-kyu". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Added "Orgon - The Thousand Martial Leader" and "Vine - The Cursed Eye". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Added "Khamsin Nbh'w - The Ritually Dressed Chaser", "Wilhelmina Carmel - The Manipulator of Objects", and "Seirei-den". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Pic-OkayOCG-GoodBalance-GoodDark Lightning's Overall Rate:10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Added "Unrestricted Spell - Tenpa Jyousai" and "Unrestricted Spell - City Devouring". Also is "Vine - The Cursed Eye" overpowering? If so, does changing it to a 5 STARS monster balance it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted February 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Added "Sydonay - The Metamorphosis" and "Metamorphosis Chimera". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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