Raelen Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 What do you think? I posted this separately as well so I could get more feedback on it. SnorloudleonSnorlax + Umbreon + Exploud + Kangaskan + Torkoal + Spiritomb Rate, hate, debate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revan Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 I like it. But where is the umbreon part of it? ((Damn, so close to my name-change. Just need a few more points!)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted January 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 I like it. But where is the umbreon part of it? ((Damn' date=' so close to my name-change. Just need a few more points!))[/quote'] Sorry, should have said Umbreon's coloring although the yellow circles are Umbreon's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superbull Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 I think it is awsome good spice10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 I like it. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 I forgot what I said about this sprite the last time I saw it. I want to say though I probably said it was cluttered. I've never been a fan of too many themes. You have dark energy orgs, smoke, largeness, eyes/spots. I mean you fit it together, but it all seems too busy. This might be because I view splices too much as actual things. I picture them making something. I can't really picture what your thing would be might be the problem. Smoke suggests poison. Dark orbs make me think ghost or dark. The spots make me think the thing is sick. I think taking away the spots on the stomach, smoke, and orbs would make a very clean and nice looking sprite. Looking at that myself, it isn't too bad. I will admit plain. Throwing the smoke back in wouldn't hurt though. I mean using the sound tubes as smoke stacks was a great idea. With the whole Dark/Sick theme gone, it has it's own personalty, instead of like 5. A theme that doesn't clutter, or even makes itself noticed that well, the pouch. I'd say ditch it altogether. I want to say make it more noticeable, but it would just try and share the attention with too many other things. A big reason why the themes so clutter, they don't come together with Snorlax. Snorlax is big and noticeable, hard to get around that. I mean you look at your splice here, you see snorlax with 5 different things going on. It's basically a Snorlax Super Deluxe. So each theme feels separate, they stick out, they don't fall in and blend, so they become even more noticeable. P.S. I love how with better sprites, I tear them apart even harder =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Well, I think it's great =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 I like it 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bridge Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 great one there 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Thaynx for your comments, Jappio. ^_^I knew I could count on you. I was picturing the dark orbs as orbs or specks of soot. That was what I was picturing when I made it, anyway. I could take of the spots on the stomach, though. It does look a bit too crowded with the spots. Speaking of crowded, my original idea was make another smaller version and put it in the Kangaskan pouch. Imagine how crowded that would've been! ^_^ Thaynx for the input everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Ooh I like that, good job. Some of the spots look a bit funny but overall it's great. I think Exploud is one of the hardest things to splice but you've done it quite expertly. Also the floaty spots look a bit unnecessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Ooh I like that' date=' good job. Some of the spots look a bit funny but overall it's great. I think Exploud is one of the hardest things to splice but you've done it quite expertly. Also the floaty spots look a bit unnecessary.[/quote'] You don't like the floaty spots? Aww man...That's one of my favorite parts... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 You are a really good splicer 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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