Origami Cards

[Felix]

Rate and help with OCG (plus point out typo and grammar errors) so I can get them 100% perfect. Help me out enough and there's some of my leftover, name change, points for you.

 

Some have recently been changed and there may be some errors so please point hem out before I start making their pics.

 

[spoiler=Origami Beasts]

Level 7+

 

~ Origami - Dragon

LIGHT/Plant /8/2700/2300

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by returning 2 face-up “Origami” monsters on your field to your hand. Once per turn, you can return 1 face-up “Origami” monster on your field to your hand to randomly discard 1 card from your opponent’s hand to the Graveyard. Each time this effect is activated, inflict 300 damage to your opponent.

 

~ Origami - Houou

FIRE/Plant /8/2400/2400

This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by returning 2 face-up “Origami” monsters on your field to your hand. Once per turn, you can return 1 face-up “Origami” monster on your field to your hand. Each time an “Origami” monster is returned from the field to your hand, inflict 600 damage to your opponent.

 

~ Origami - Spider

DARK/Plant/7/2800/1600

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by returning 2 face-up “Origami” monsters on your field to your hand. Each time an “Origami” monster is returned to your hand, select 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field and return it to the owner’s hand.

 

Level 5-6

 

~ Origami - Elephant

EARTH/Plant/5/2200/2200

This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by returning 1 face-up “Origami” monster on your field to your hand. While this card is face-up on the field your opponent cannot select an “Origami” monster as an attack target, other than this card.

 

~ Origami - Samurai

FIRE/Plant/6/2400/2000

This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by returning 1 face-up “Origami” monster on your field to your hand. Each time an “Origami” monster is returned from the field to your hand, change the battle position of 1 face-up monster on the field.

 

~ Origami - Rhino

EARTH/Pant/5/1900/2000

This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by returning 1 face-up “Origami” monster on your field to your hand. Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for each monster on your opponent's side of the field. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

Level 4

 

~ Origami - Crane

WIND/Plant/4/1700/1600

This card can be Special Summoned in face-up Attack Position by returning 1 face-up “Origami” monster on your field to your hand. When this monster is Special Summoned in this way, Special Summon 1 “Origami Crane Token” (Plant-Type /WIND /Level 2/ATK 1000/DEF 500) in Defense Position. While this Token is on the field, your opponent cannot select another monster as an attack target. During the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, you can return this face-up card to your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, other than “Origami Beast - Crane”. This card cannot be Summoned twice during the same turn.

~ Origami - Horse

EARTH/Plant/4/1500/1600

Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can look at the top card of your opponent's Deck. During the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, you can return this face-up card to your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, other than “Origami Beast - Horse”. This card cannot be Summoned twice during the same turn.

 

~ Origami - Wraith

DARK/Plant/4/1800/500

Only once while this card is face-up on the field you can discard one Trap Card from your hand to destroy 1 face-up monster with 1000, or less, more ATK than this card. During the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, you can return this face-up card to your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, other than “Origami Beast - Wraith”. This card cannot be Summoned twice during the same turn.

 

~ Origami - Pangolin

EARTH/Plant/1200/2200

At the end of the Battle Phase, if this card attacked or was attacked, return the monster this card battled with to the owner’s hand. During the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, you can return this face-up card to your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, other than “Origami Beast - Pangolin”. This card cannot be Summoned twice during the same turn.

 

~ Origami - Bear

EARTH/Plant/1900/1600

Once per turn, you can return 1 face-up “Origami” monster on your side of the field to your hand. During the turn you activated this effect, this card can attack twice during the Battle Phase. This card returns to the owner's hand during your opponent’s End Phase. When this card is returned to your hand in this way, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, other than “Origami Beast - Bear”. This card cannot be Summoned twice during the same turn.

 

Level 3

 

~ Origami - Giraffe

EARTH/Plant/3/1200/1000

Once per turn, by discarding one card from your hand to the Graveyard you can look at 1 face-down card on your opponent's field. During the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, you can return this face-up card to your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, other than “Origami Beast - Giraffe”. This card cannot be Summoned twice during the same turn.

 

~ Origami - Warthog

EARTH/Plant/3/1200/1400

When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 Level 4, or lower, “Origami” monster to your hand. If this card was added to your hand due to the effect of an “Origami” monster, Special Summon this card in Attack Position.

 

~ Origami - Hydralisk

LIGHT/Plant/3/1000/800

If this card attacks a Level 4 or higher monster, the ATK of the attacked monster is halved. During the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, you can return this face-up card to your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, other than “Origami Beast - Hydralisk”. This card cannot be Summoned twice during the same turn.

 

~ Origami - Swan

WIND/Plant/1000/1000

When this card battles an opponent's monster, after damage calculation you can remove that monster from play. Return this face-up card to your hand during the End Phase of your opponent’s turn.

 

Level 2

 

Origami - Frog

WATER/Plant/2/500/400

When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of an “Origami” monster, draw 1 card from your Deck, you must then discard 1 card from your hand. During the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, you can return this face-up card to your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, other than “Origami Beast - Frog”. This card cannot be Summoned twice during the same turn.

 

 

[fenrir]

Impressive. No wolf? o_O

[Felix]

Nah no wolf, it would be fiddly to draw, I'm bad at cat and dog shaped things.

[OMGAKITTY]

~ Origami Beast - Hydralisk

LIGHT/Plant/3/1000/800

If this card declares an attack on a monster whose Level is higher than 4, the ATK of the defending monster is halved.

You can return this face-up card to your hand during the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, excluding this card.

[Felix]

Thanks OMGAKITTY you get some points for that but the thing is I need it so that you can't summon a card of the same name, therefor it has to end in [except "Insert Name".] Also it's level 4 or (I put f instead of r) higher, not above 4. Therefor the final product should be:

 

If this card declares an attack on a Level 4 or higher monster, the ATK of the defending monster is halved. During the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, you can return this face-up card to your hand and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, except "Origami Beast - Hydralisk".

 

OK that's Hydralisk done, anyone else wanna point out some errors in my OCG?

[Felix]

Bump, done a big edit now.

[Felix]

Bump

[Felix]

Jesus christ, BUMP!

[RyanAtlus]

they're OK 8/10

[Felix]

Thanx for the rate :D I'd of thought 8/10 meant better than "OK" though...

[Felix]

BUMP

[El Beasto Perezoso]

Meh...~ Like the idea though

[Felix]

Wow thanks for being so helpful o_o... What do you mean "Meh"?

[Umbra]

The archetype as a whole seems fine. Based around returning the monsters to the hand; an idea I tried ages ago with Alien Heroes, but executed differently. You've done it very well. Using returns as Tributes for high-level monsters is something I'd never have thought of.

[Felix]

Soooooooooo how's the OCG? And thanks for responding to the PM:)

[.Requiem]

Okay here is some OCG fixing:

 

your side of the field=your field (If referring to a monster "1 monster you control" use control"

opponent's side of the field=opponent's field (Same thing, but can be optional)

battle position=When talking about a position it is uppercase "Battle Position"

**** Card Effect=effect of an ***** Card

During your End Phase of your opponent's turn=during your opponent's End Phase.

 

Some more, but I will tell you later as I will look for them

 

Seems good 8/10

[Felix]

... I :cry: for my failures, thanks you'll get 30 points for that.

[.Requiem]

Keep your points I donot want

[Felix]

Seriously? They're just points left over after a name change that was free. I'm just finding a way to get rid of them. Once again thanks.

[Toffee.]

DNA Surgery + Cyber Summon Blaster + any 2 Origami cards = game

[Felix]

Hmmm... I may need to change some wordings, great catch on the bad bit. I need something that says only one can be summoned during your opponents turn.

[Hanta]

DNA Surgery + Cyber Summon Blaster + any 2 Origami cards = game

 

How so? They're all considered Normal Summons except with Origami Crane. Ultimate Offering is the only option, and that takes more Life Points than CSB dishes out. So yes, with two Origami Cranes, you could, but limit it and it's perfectly fine. No other monsters can do that. For my review:

 

Bah more Plants. I guess it's the only choice as a type for paper really though. Great set overall. 9/10. They should say, though:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by returning # face-up "Origami" monsters from your side of the field to your hand (This Special Summon is treated as a Normal Summon).

[Felix]

Actually they can, "During the End Phase of your opponent’s turn, you can return this face-up card to your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4, or lower, “Origami” monster from your hand, other than “Origami Beast - ????”."

 

It's a great catch and unfortunately one that will require a big edit.

[Hanta]

Yeah, but that's once per one of your opponent's turns. To be an OTK it'd have to be an unlimited amount of times per turn.

 

Oh, and, it's "Level 4 or lower", not "Level 4, or lower,"

[Felix]

If it's your opponent's End Phase then the effect can still be activated, stop telling me what the cards I made can and can't do:roll: