Doom™ Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 HONESTLY, not my best work, probably not even close. Meh, I kinda like my Blood of the Master card better. I'm not sure about this one... Card suggestions are welcome. Image cred to Blizzard (website) [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, active 1 of the following effects:1) Attack all of your opponent's monsters. Your opponent does not take Battle Damage.2) Discard 2 cards. This card can attack your opponent directly.3) Select 2 cards in your hand. If you play both of these during the next 2 turns, this card's ATK becomes 4000. After you attack once with this card, destroy this card. Then, you lose 2000 Life Points.4) If this card has been on the field for more than 10 turns, you win the Duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Well there are some OCG errors. Also, you should use bullets or dashes, not numbers to list effects. Guess it's all right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 loose the black border of the pix...some effects are really ov'pw..pix credit??6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted January 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Yeah I kinda figured about the OCG errors... And since I haven't been on in a while, I forgot bullets / dashes... EDIT: Oh yeah. pic credit... Added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Wow where should I start first. Well first the pic needs some work. Some OCG errors......... OP.................................................................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Listing effects look dumb.Correction.Listing effects are dumb. Before you start crying and saying I'm flaming, let me elaborate:Listing displays absolutely no creativity...essentially what you did was grab 4 different effects at random and smash them into this card. There is no flow. As stated above, some of these effects are really OP.Well, most of them are really OP.There are no negative drawbacks to any of the effects.And I'm not sure why "The Warrior of Breaking Dawn" would be a DARK monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted January 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 So far, I kinda noticed all the things you guys listed. This card ain't honestly my best work... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 No effect flow. Instead of "when this card is Summoned", it should be; "If this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned successfully..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Odd... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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