Hexanort Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 [spoiler=lore]If this card battles a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Once per turn, by discarding 1 card from your hand, destroy 1 Spell and Trap Cards on the field. You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard by Releasing 2 Dragon-Type monster you control. pic:http://www.wizards.com/global/images/duelmasters_coolstuff_creatures017_picMain_en.jpg please rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Instead of realeasing could you say tribute, but 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldeneagle Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 LV4?! WTF? 2200 ATK and a really strong effect is way OPed even for a LV5, let alone a level 4! 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 LV4?! WTF? 2200 ATK and a really strong effect is way OPed even for a LV5' date=' let alone a level 4! 5/10[/quote'] sorry its supposed to be level 6, i accidentaly click lv 4 and i dont notice it, i'll fix them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldeneagle Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Kk, soz i always seem to point out accidental clicks like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
god_duel Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 information who want to find card easy go to http://www.planetyugioh.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Bump only after 24 hours have passed... you have been warned. Secondly, the card is really nice. It's well-balanced, and I like the picture (though the name's al little corny -- fitting though -- and you could use to zoom in on the actual figure of the dragon... it took some searching before I found it's head.) Of course, there are always things to fix. Your effect is the main one. It can be cut into three parts:1. If this card battles a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. 2. Once per turn, by discarding 1 card from your hand, destroy 1 Spell and Trap Cards on the field. 3. You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard by Releasing 2 Dragon-Type monster you control. In #1, change "...Battle Damage to your opponent." into "...Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points." For #2, "...destroy 1 Spell and Trap Cards" should be "...destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card".And then, in #3, the correct OCG is not "Release", it's "Tribute". Unless you're writing in Japanese (and I can clearly see the text is in English...), you shouldn't use "Release". It's a YCMaker's way of trying to bolster his or her superiority, but all it's doing is degrading the overall card quality by making it less realistic, and more confusing for us stupid people trying to read. Change that.And finally, switch effect #2 with effect #1. They should go in order of when they can activate. You only activate effect #1 in the Battle Phase, but if you Summoned this monster during the Main Phase 1, you could use it's effect #2 before using it's effect #1. Effect #3 is fine where it is... Overall, good job! I like the looks, I like the technique, but your writing isn't so good. If you work on that, and keep this overall level of creation efficiency, you'll be on your way to a pro-quality set! :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 this card is nice....well balance... to me..and very nice pix..... i love dragons..9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 i do like the pic as well, there were some ocg errors which i think were pointed out to me, its quite good, i would say 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 I personally hate the pic. =/ I can't find any OCG Errors, but maybe it's because I'm tired. =/ 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 This is not OP'd. Releasing is not the correct OCG term for Tributing. It was never officially changed. Another minor OCG error, Cards = Card. 8.5/10 overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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