lala7777 Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 this is the first card in my set i am making rise of the computersoh and sorry the OCG is bad i will fix it soonnext cardsLinux open SUSEWIN MEupgrade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Good Idea, Pic Could Be Better. OCG Should Be Like This: When this card destroyes a monster in battle, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Win 3.1" from your Deck. Shuffle your Deck. Also, To Be Real Realistic, Make The Set ID Something Like "ROTC-EN001". And, Make The Circulation Either 1st Edition, Limited Edition, Or Just Leave It Blank. Also, Make "warrior" "Warrior". But Really, It Shouldn't Be A Warrior (In My Eyes). It Looks Like A Machine. So, Edit That. Other Than That, It's A Good Idea. Rating: 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 This Card shouldn't be in the realistic section but it might to good for the joke card thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Could use some work.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lala7777 Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 card fixed thanks CamosityDude for the suggestions ya DOS is more of a machine than a warrior Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pitchblack64 Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 i dont know but should it say "then shuffle your deck"good work could use a different pic thoughand whats with the "machine" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lala7777 Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 added 2 new cards and fixed "machine" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 You forgot to make win3.1 a effect monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 thats what i was gonna say! there a pretty good start but... um... the pics kinda arent good... work on them ill give ya 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lala7777 Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 ok i will fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 [/code]OCG Correction For WIN 3.1 (First Of All, Make It An Effect Monster) When this card is destroyed by battle you can destroy 1 Machine- Type monster your opponent controls. Oh, Well, Your Nice. Here: [img=http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/6783/155008tb9.jpg] OCG Correction For "Syntax Error" Tribute 1 face-up monster you control that has "DOS" or "WIN" in it's card name and increase your Life Points equal to that monster's Level X100. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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