TheLastGod Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Here is my first fan fic hope you like it Prologue There is a kid named Yuki Neo that on a quest to defeat all rising power of darkness. CHARACTERS NAME: Yuki NeoAGE: 15DECK: mixFAVORITE CARD: NAME: Todd WoodsAGE: 15DECK: mixFAVORITE CARD: NAME: Miley RogerAGE: 15DECK: charmers and warriorFAVORITE CARD: NAME: Yami SetoAGE: 19DECK: lightFAVORITE CARD: NAME: Bakura VinceAGE: 17DECK: darkFAVORITE CARD: ??? NAME: Errol KingAGE: 26DECK: ???FAVORITE CARD: episode 1-The Light Fallen Into Darkness ???: Come on Yuki!???: You can do it!Yuki Neo looked up at his friends.Yuki: Thanks guys.Todd: No way!Yuki: What!Yuki looked up and saw darkness creeping under the sun.Miley: Guys come on.Yuki: No way I'm leaving!Todd: Fine.Then they ran off. People was runnning away.Yuki: At least I'm brave.Then something hit him in his side and he fell down. He opened his eyes and was in a dark room with a guy standing a few feet away.???: Get up and duel me!Yuki: Fine.As he got up he pulled his deck out of his pocket.???: Ready wimp?Yuki: Yes and your the wimp. (DUEL) ???: You can go first.Yuki: I draw then play Red-Eyes Black Chick in ATK (800\500) now I send him to the graveyard to play Red-Eyes Black Dragon In ATK (2400\2000) now I put two cards face down to end my turn. (4000 LP)???: I draw then play Secret Mirror this lets me tribute two monsters to summon Kepp, Lord Of Secret Mirrors in ATK (2000\2000) now look at his effect I'll pay 1000 life points to attack you directly now Kepp, Lord Of Secret Mirrors attack him with Mirror Bomb now I put down a face down card to end. (3000 LP)Yuki: I draw now I tribute Villain Slayer Knight and Neo-Spacian Aqua Dolphin to summon Villain Slayer in ATK (3000\2300) now Red-Eyes Black Dragon attack his Kepp, Lord Of Secret Mirrors and then Villain Slayer attack his life points directly so I win. (2000 LP)???: Wait a sec I play my face down Secret Mirror Block this lets the first attack cancelled so now still with one monster on the field your Villain Slayer going to have to attack my Kepp, Lord Of Secret Mirrors all that only cancelling my move. (2000 LP) Yuki: I draw then play SuperVillain Vince in ATK (1300\1500) now I send him and Red-Eyes Black Dragon to the graveyard to let my Villain Slayer to attack you directly.As Villain Slayer hit his life points down to 0 the guy looked up. He had a pale, white face and black eyes.???: Mine name is Bakura Vince and this ain't the last you seen of me.Yuki woke up on the ground where he fell.Yuki: Was that a dream????: What was a dream?Yuki: Huh oh it is just you Todd oh nothing really come on. They got up and walked back to the city. end episode 1: next episode 2-The Darkness Is Rising Hope you liked that Make your own character NAME:AGE:DECK:FAVORITE CARD: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mike Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 wtf? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 I put the chapter in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Come on tell me how to get better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 I like your Fan-Fic...It's somewhat inspiring for mine!!! Goood Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue-eyes Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Yea pretty good for your first one bud I say that is the 2 best in I had ever read. (behind Invert_Remix's) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 I added a new character and here is the secon chapter this is a little bit short. episode 2-The Darkness Is Rising Yuki Neo walked through the park thinking of the dream he had three days ago.Todd: Yuki come look.They ran to the town square.???: Who ever dares to face me come up and face me.Yuki: I will.???: Aw a wimp like you to face the all mighty Errol King.Yuki: Yes.Errol: Okay. DUEL Errol: I go first. I draw then play Spear Dragon in DEF mode (0\1900) then put two cards face down to end my turn. (4000 LP)Yuki: I draw then play the spell Dark Fusion this lets me fuse two dark type monsters in my hand and I pick Neo-Spacian Dark Panther and The Foul Ghoul to form Neo-Spacian Foul Ghoul in ATK mode (3000\1900) now attack his Spear Dragon with Ghoul Attack now I put a card face down to end my turn. (4000 LP)Errol: I draw then play Copycat in ATK mode (0\0) now check effect this turns into one of your monsters so Neo-Spacian Foul Ghoul come out in ATK mode (3000\1900) then I play Return From The Dead this lets me summon one monster back from the graveyard so I pick Spear Dragon in DEF mode (0\1900) so I end my turn. (4000 LP)Yuki: I draw then play Spear Dragon Of The Light in ATK mode (1900\0) then I end. (4000 LP) end episode 2: next episode 3-The Duel Turns Into A Fight Sorry it was so short it is just really late and stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 I added a new character and here is the secon chapter this is a little bit short. episode 2-The Darkness Is Rising Yuki Neo walked through the park thinking of the dream he had three days ago.Todd: Yuki come look.They ran to the town square.???: Who ever dares to face me come up and face me.Yuki: I will.???: Aw a wimp like you to face the all mighty Errol King.Yuki: Yes.Errol: Okay. DUEL Errol: I go first. I draw then play Spear Dragon in DEF mode (0\1900) then put two cards face down to end my turn. (4000 LP)Yuki: I draw then play the spell Dark Fusion this lets me fuse two dark type monsters in my hand and I pick Neo-Spacian Dark Panther and The Foul Ghoul to form Neo-Spacian Foul Ghoul in ATK mode (3000\1900) now attack his Spear Dragon with Ghoul Attack now I put a card face down to end my turn. (4000 LP)Errol: I draw then play Copycat in ATK mode (0\0) now check effect this turns into one of your monsters so Neo-Spacian Foul Ghoul come out in ATK mode (3000\1900) then I play Return From The Dead this lets me summon one monster back from the graveyard so I pick Spear Dragon in DEF mode (0\1900) so I end my turn. (4000 LP)Yuki: I draw then play Spear Dragon Of The Light in ATK mode (1900\0) then I end. (4000 LP) end episode 2: next episode 3-The Duel Turns Into A Fight Sorry it was so short it is just really late and stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bubbleman3000 Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 I like it but maybe you should prelong your episodes into parts to keep people reading... please carry on, on sky falls thx again for joining Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 I'll make a nother one later and BM (can I call you BM) I posted on the forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bubbleman3000 Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 yeah you can call me BM, thx for posting, have you read mine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 Thx make a nother later if can I'm way busy with homework and stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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