De pharoah Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 LOOK!!!I appreciate criticism, especially stuff about balancing out effectsThis is my 1st Thread, so b4 dissing my cards, remember, im a n00B! EDIT: they were rubbish, so i deleted them, sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 alot of the pictutres need backrounds, you need img cred, and try to not make normal monsters... i cant think of one person on this site who likes normal monsters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 i told u that all the images are from google!ill get backgroundsill make effect monsters toothx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Celtic Lightning Warrior is a rather overpowered theme-specific beatstick. The theme isnt enough to balance it. The second card is fine apart from the OCG errors. The third card is overpowered. No Vanilla should have over 3000 ATK, Level 10 or not. The fourth one is too playable for an ATK like 6000 and considering the Fusion Material Monsters. The fifth one is rather underpowered due to lack of playability. The fact you have to use a terrible Nomi, a bad support card and a card that needs its own Deck to work is the cause. The sixth one is underpowered for 2 Tributes and should either have more ATK or be an Effect monster or a Synchro. The seventh one is quite good and done properly. The eighth one should have more ATK or be an Effect Monster or a Synchro. Tyrant End Dragon seems a little underpowered. It needs an effect considering the Fusion Material Monsters. Ultimate Dragon of Darkness should not interact with Ultimate Dragon of Divinity. A huge beatstick summoning another huge beatstick is unacceptable. Basically. Overpowered. Ultimate Dragon of Divinity is very unplayable without Ultimate Dragon of Darkness but ridiculously overpowered with Ultimate Dragon of Darkness. I would redo the effect. Night Reaper is the only card you did properly. Good ATK, good Level, DARK and good Dragon and Vanilla support make it playable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 iv taken in all criticism, and now, i present: Dreadnought Judgement!!!!! next up, Armoured Dreadnought!!!!! youl have to wait. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Celtic Lightning Warrior ?? You totally ripped of my card but added the word 'lightning' and overpowered it (even though my one is 'slightly' overpowered) and by the way Vanilla's are very boring! Oh and i'm a noob too so ?!?!?First off don't post your cards in other peoples threadsSecond That pic and the name is overused so its not really a rip-offThird try to at least say something helpful instead of just ripping his/her head-off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Celtic Lightning Warrior ?? You totally ripped of my card but added the word 'lightning' and overpowered it (even though my one is 'slightly' overpowered) and by the way Vanilla's are very boring! Oh and i'm a noob too so ?!?!? Your card is quite balanced but that doesnt distract from the fact you shouldnt be posting your cards in other people's topics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 hey, from now on, you can post all your realistic cards here, i will also post mine too I may have killed a puppy... i need comments on Dreadnought Judgement, PLZ!oh yeah, and about Celtic Lightning Warrior, your a noob somehow? i think a vanilla is a normal monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 New Cards to go with dreadnought judgement Armoured Dreadnought!!!!! i lied Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 1. Infinite-Dragon Warrior of The Light and darkness is way overpowered and raise it's effect higher but i'd recommend to lower it to 4000 Because that is just way too powerful. (Sorry!)2. Celtic Lightning Warrior is a bit overpowered. There are lot more i have to explain but i'm in quite a rush posting, anyways 6 / 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 thxi know my 1st cards were rubbish, look at my new cards though!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 -When making cards make sure they all have effects, otherwise it's not worth posting. =/-Pics are good. -Tiger's Overall Rating: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 THX KING OF DOGS!more cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Way too many vanillas. Also, 6000 ATK for a card is far too high in my opinion. Some cards are pretty powerful, 7.0/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 thx spire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 1: Edit your first post for new cards2: Why does that AV look familiar.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 more cards! Spellcaster^^^ deleting 1st post cos they were rubbishedit rather2: Why does that AV look familiar..........whats an av? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 learn how to edit your first post. cards are decent for a newb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 learn how to edit your first post. cards are decent for a newb.i know how to edit them, i just cant be bothered, and the cards that were there will infect the cards which will take their place, and will make them extremely oPed!!!thx for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Demon Set coming up soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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