Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 [align=center] [spoiler=Effect]As long as this card remains in Attack Position, increase the DEF of this card by 200 during each turn. As long as this card remains in Defense Position increase the ATK of this card by 100 each turn. When this card is destroyed it is removed from play. When this card is removed from play you can draw 3 cards from your Deck. If you draw "Sea Dragon" by this effect, you can Special Summon it to the field in Face-Up Attack Position. Image found on Google...http://www.quiztron.com/quiz_images/full_153991716.jpg[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 VERY good card, no flaws!11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks, Man! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De pharoah Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 its ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 OCG FIX:When this card is in Attack Position, increase this cards DEF by 200 DEF each turn. When this card is in Defense position it gains 100 ATK each turn. When this card is destroyed remove it from play instead. When this card is removed from play you can draw 3 more cards. If one of these cards is another "Sea Dragon" you can summon it to the field in Face-Up attack position I think thats it... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks, I'll fix that right now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 No prob not trying to show you up i just fixed a few sentences and a few words :D i did 2-3 fixes :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 As long as this card remains in Attack Position, increase the DEF of this card by 200 during each turn. As long as this card remains in Defense Position increase the ATK of this card by 100. When this card is destroyed it is removed from play. When this card is removed from play you may draw 3 cards from your Deck. If you draw "Sea Dragon" by this effect, you may Special Summon it to the field in face-up Attack Position. What do you mean three or more cards? >.< So you could draw as many cards as you want? Come on, of corse that's overpowered. The card had various OCG errors which I fixed. Meh, try something more unique next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Well i guess you fixed the rest huh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Spire: Thanks, I really needed the help. I haven't made a card since August. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 I haven't made a card since i was a late 2 star or early 3 star :( And the OCG is pointed out so that is good. Pic is ok. Great over all! :)As you do, Shadow Striker's rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks, dude! ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 you still never changed may to can.... not bad card do.. but worthless 2nd effect unless you meant each turn as well.. overall 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 now that it's fixed 9/10... wait you still didn't change 2nd effect is it supposed to be gains 100 ATK points each turn..?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 "Points" after ATK or DEF is not needed. It said so in Dj's thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 no that wasn't a fix... i mean every turn you only have "As long as this card remains in Defense Position increase the ATK of this card by 100." should it be: As long as this card remains in Defense Position increase the ATK of this card by 100 each turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Oh, thanks! ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 no problem here to help.. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InAmerica Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Woah, I see what you mean I'm making ideas as i speak and IN AMERICA! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks, Inamerica! ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 VERY good card' date=' no flaws!11/10[/quote']Exactly what he said. 11/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks, dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 I see you added a holo version. Lol. :lol: Rating upped to 10/10 (Fixed OCG and holo) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 I'm suprised no-one has noticed the Spelling Error in the card Type "Sea Serpent" :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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