Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 [align=center]This is my Dragon set. I currently have 5 out of 100 cards done. More will be added soon. [spoiler=Sea Dragon] [spoiler=Effect]As long as this card remains in Attack Position, increase the DEF of this card by 200 during each turn. As long as this card remains in Defense Position increase the ATK of this card by 100 each turn. When this card is destroyed it is removed from play. When this card is removed from play you can draw 3 cards from your Deck. If you draw "Sea Dragon" by this effect, you can Special Summon it to the field in Face-Up Attack Position. Image Credit: http://www.quiztron.com/quiz_images/full_153991716.jpg [spoiler=Sea Dragon's Guardian] [spoiler=Effect]You can only equip this card to a "Sea Dragon" that is in play. When "Sea Dragon" gets attacked and defeated, "Sea Dragon's Guardian" gets destroyed instead and "Sea Dragon" gets returned to the middle of your Deck. Image Credit: http://media.animegalleries.net/albums/userpics/49144/waterdragon.jpg [spoiler=Reborn Dragon] [spoiler=Effect]You can equip this card to one monster on your field. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK each turn. When the equipped monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can return this card to your Deck and remove 2 monsters in your hand from play. If you cannot return this card to your Deck remove it from play at the end of your turn. Image Credit: http://www.tokyopop.co.uk/ugc/1/3/2/0/4/4/3/u/avatar/1445636.jpg [spoiler=Hell's Fire Dragon] [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be played when you have one "Sea Dragon" in play, one "Reborn Dragon" in play, and one "Earth Dragon" in play. For every card in your hand, this card gains 500 ATK and 500 DEF. For every card in your Graveyard, this card looses 100 ATK and 100 DEF. When this card gets sent to the Graveyard you can pay 1500 Life Points to move it to the top of your Deck. This card cannot be removed from play. Image Credit: http://zfes-planet.com.tripod.com/VideoGames/dragon.jpg [spoiler=Earth Dragon] [spoiler=Effect]This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly for a cost of 2000 Life Points. After your Battle Phase, this card automatically switches into Defense Position. When this card is destroyed it is automatically removed from play. Image Credit: http://images.elfwood.com/art/a/h/ahamaker/earthdrag.jpg [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windfang Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Only see one mistake on first card. It's Sea Serpent, not Sea Serpant. 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks, I'll try to fix that. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Just some fixes: Sea Dragon's Guardian: This card can only equipped to "Sea Dragon". When the equipped monster is attacked and destroyed, destroy this card instead and return "Sea Dragon" to the middle of your Deck. Reborn Dragon: The equipped monster gains 500 ATK each turn. When the equipped monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can return this card to your Deck and remove 2 monsters in your hand from play. If you cannot return this card to your Deck, remove it from play at the end of your turn. Fixes are bolded. I can't really see any problems with the other 2 cards. Just the fourth one, I think the ATK and DEF should just be a simple ?. Stuff like ??? or ???? are more characteristic of God Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____pi____ Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 the first one is oped and the last is uped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Just some fixes: Sea Dragon's Guardian: This card can only equipped to "Sea Dragon". When the equipped monster is attacked and destroyed' date=' [b']destroy this card instead and return[/b] "Sea Dragon" to the middle of your Deck. Reborn Dragon: The equipped monster gains 500 ATK each turn. When the equipped monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can return this card to your Deck and remove 2 monsters in your hand from play. If you cannot return this card to your Deck, remove it from play at the end of your turn. Fixes are bolded. I can't really see any problems with the other 2 cards. Just the fourth one, I think the ATK and DEF should just be a simple ?. Stuff like ??? or ???? are more characteristic of God Cards. Thanks, man for the help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 The last card is overpowered. No Direct Attacker should have that much ATK power even if it does switch to Defense Position. It can also change back the next turn making it more overpowered. I think it needs a cost of some sort to be acceptable. A Life Point Cost, a discard cost. Something along those lines. That cards ATK is only 400 ATK less than Goblin Attack Force and Indomittable Fighter Lei Lei and 300 ATK less than Giant Orc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Thanks, dude. I'll fix that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 overused pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 overused pics Which ones? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starwebs1 Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Cool cards. OCG - 7/10Effects - 9/10Names - 10/10Pics - 10/10 Total - 36/40 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 Thanks, man...I think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 you worded Sea Dragons Reborn wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 very nice!! but the last one is op'ed... make it a higher cost or lower his ATK to like 1000 or somethin...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Thanks, man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 one = 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Okay. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 100 cards are to be made?! Cool. The cards so far are great. Reborn dragon pic is overused. Other than that, nice job.Shadow Striker's Overall rating: 9/10 <---Your rating method or pretty close to it. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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