lugia61617 Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 Hi.I'm just testing out using images I make with a camera, scanner, Photoshop etc. I have made a few now. the Mechariboh cards are kinda like Winged Kuribohs, but WAY cooler!Effect: "Winged Kuriboh + 1 level 3 or lower Machine-type monster.This card can only be summoned by Fusion Summon. During your 2nd Standby Phase after this card was Fusion Summoned, you can remove this card and 1 "Transcendant Wings" from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Winged Mechariboh LV 11" from your hand or Deck."LV 12's effects (He's level 12 and difficult to summon so I would call him Balanced):"Winged Mechariboh LV 1" + "Winged Mechariboh LV 11"This card can only be summoned by a Fusion Summon using the above Fusion Material monsters. By tributing 3 monsters you control, inflict 3000 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, during either player's Battle Phase, you can remove from play the top 10 cards of your Deck, increase the ATK of this card by 4000. If this card is targeted by a Trap card, you can remove from play all monsters in your Graveyard to negate the Activation of the Trap card and destroy it. If you activate one of this card's effects, it is removed from play during the End Phase.ordinary Mechariboh cards: oh, and: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugia61617 Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 still no comments? please! FEEDBACK! awww... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 You don't seem very confident in your ability to make cards. Even if feedback is bad, making more cards is how you get better. I'm not going to "Attack" you for OCG, but I will try to correct it for you. For future reference, copy and paste the effect so people can read it if it's long. FIX: You can only activate this card when you don't have any monsters in your control.You can send a Tuner and a non-Tuner monster from your hand or Deck to Synchro Summon a monster whose total Level Stars is equal to or more than the sum of the monsters sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect.[/b] I'm not very good with Synchro's, so some of it may be wrong, but alot of it is better than what you have (no offense). 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 I like it as for the OCG corrections i think choke already covered them all so after all that 8.4/10On an off topic note: lol in your sig it says your white and one of your enemies is black. Hehe figures :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugia61617 Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 thank you. As for what Choke said, You are correct. I don't have much confidence. in most of my other threads I have...recieved bad feedback. I will work on the OCG and replace its current text with what you put. (This card was inspired by Future Fusion if you hadn't guessed)quick note for choke: Synchro Summoning requires the Tuner and non-Tuners levels to total that of the synchro, not "whose level stars are equal to or more". but thnx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God-Card-Master Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Good card but many ocg errors-no offence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugia61617 Posted February 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Good card but many ocg errors-no offence ok, then what is the correct OCG for it? seriously, I need help!:shock::shock::shock::? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 "You can only activate this card if you control no monsters. You can send a Tuner and a non-Tuner monster from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard and Synchro Summon a monster whose total Level is equal to the sum of the monsters sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect." That should be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugia61617 Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 "You can only activate this card if you control no monsters. You can send a Tuner and a non-Tuner monster from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard and Synchro Summon a monster whose total Level is equal to the sum of the monsters sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect." That should be better. Thank you for your help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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