Dragon™ Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 These are just some simple cards I thaught of making. Enjoy/Comment/Rate. (Note: I started using some NEW ocg.) [IMG]http://i44.tinypic.com/dzbhi9.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i43.tinypic.com/atvv5y.png[/IMG] Girl of Phoenix credit to: http://hardedge-maelstrom.deviantart.com/art/Power-of-the-Phoenix-16768359 Stardust dragon pic to Google. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Actually, that is not new OCG. I think new OCG was just a rumor. Anyway, 9/10. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Thanks, also- I read the OCG thread. It says Advance Summoned and your opponent's field is called new ocg >.>... Maybe they had it all wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshiman™ Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 2nd pic is light end dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 what is light end dragon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 what is light end dragon? http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Light_End_Dragon That is Light End Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 oh people im so sorry if thats light end dragon. i never heard of it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 1. I LOVE your holo effects. You have some OCG errors. This is how I would write it in my OCG world. Girl of Phoenix: This card can directly attack your opponent's Life Points. When this card is Tribute Summoned, select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and roll a 6-Sided die.If the number rolled is a 6, send the monster to the Graveyard. Stardust Dragon: When this card is Special Summoned, you can discard as many cards from your hand. Then inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of cards discarded x700. Select 1 card from your opponent's side of the field and roll a 6-Sided die.If the number rolled is an even number, increase the ATK of the selected card by 3000, and decrease half of your opponent's Life Points. Stardust Dragon is very lopsided IMO. It doesn't really help you at all, it helps your opponent way better than it helps you. Overall, 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 It was is The "GX" Manga series. Your OCG is not new, it's not real in fact. "DJ Osiris" actually believed that "Advance Summon" would become the new term for "Special Summon" in 2009... he was very wrong... The correct phrasing for your cards would be: Girl of Phoenix (which sounds like a name a caveman would give)"When this card is Special Summoned, select 1 monster on your opponent's field and roll a 6-sided die. If the result is 6, destroy the selected monster. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly." Stardust Dragon - Envoy of the End (seriously? Taking 2 names and putting them together doesn't make the name original. This sounds like a seriously cheesy GX monster. Oh, wait, it is!)"1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, discard any number of cards in your hand to inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of card's discarded x700. Then [or Once per turn,](you must choose one of these) choose 1 monster on your opponent's field and roll a 6-sided die. If the result is 2, 4, or 6, increase the ATK of that card by 3000 and half your opponent's Life Points." There were a lot of corrections to be made here... you may want to work on your phrasing (PM me with questions!), but the biggest problem I find is the whole "new OCG" thing... it's a load of crap (but you didn't know, so everything's cool). I absolutely LOVE the fact that you made these cards "Limited Edition" and then actually PUT A GOLD STICKER on the corner!!!! Great Job!! Even for a Senior Member, that takes some thought (unfortunately). I love the first card, though she's a little wide. Your second one is nice visually too... but I prefer "Light End Dragon" to stay where it belongs. :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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