A Field spell card for dragons tell me if anything should be changed

[Nighthawk14]

Dragons Need a really good Field spell instead of the card "Mountain"

[spoiler=Effect]All Dragon-Type monsters on the field gain 500 ATK. A Dragon-Type monster cannot be destroyed during the turn it is Summoned. By removing from play 1 Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard from play, put 1 Dragon Counter on this card. By removing 3 Dragon Counters from this card, draw 1 card. When a Dragon-Type monster's effect is activated, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster from either player's Graveyard, this card's effect can only be activated once per turn.

 

 

 

PLEASE DO NOT READ THE EFFECT ON THE CARD I DID THE ENDING WRONG

[Choke]

Effect seems like a good idea for me. But if your still in the phase of fixing it up, why post an incomplete version?

 

FIX: All Dragon-Type monsters on the field gain 500 ATK. A Dragon-Type monster cannot be destroyed during the turn it is Summoned. By removing from play 1 Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard from play, put 1 Dragon Counter on this card. By removing 3 Dragon Counters from this card, draw 1 card. When a Dragon-Type monster's effect is activated, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster from either player's Graveyard, this card's effect can only be activated once per turn.

 

Whenever you're talking about Card Types, always capitalize and dash it. Example: Dragon-Type, Fiend-Type, Spellcaster-Type. If your doing Attributes capitalize the whole word. Example: This card is also treated as a LIGHT monster.

 

Always capitalize words like these also:

 

Normal Summon

Special Summon

Graveyard

Deck

Tribute

Tributing

Level

(Blank) Counter

 

Also, be careful when you use commas, if they're used wrong, it will sound very confusing and/or change the actual effect.

 

Overall, 8.5/10, fix the OCG.

[Tabris]

Remove the second sentence, and you've accomplished your intent.

[Nighthawk14]

Effect seems like a good idea for me. But if your still in the phase of fixing it up' date=' why post an incomplete version?

 

FIX: All [b']Dragon-Type[/b] monsters on the field gain 500 ATK. A Dragon-Type monster cannot be destroyed during the turn it is Summoned. By removing from play 1 Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard from play, put 1 Dragon Counter on this card. By removing 3 Dragon Counters from this card, draw 1 card. When a Dragon-Type monster's effect is activated, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster from either player's Graveyard, this card's effect can only be activated once per turn.

 

Whenever you're talking about Card Types, always capitalize and dash it. Example: Dragon-Type, Fiend-Type, Spellcaster-Type. If your doing Attributes capitalize the whole word. Example: This card is also treated as a LIGHT monster.

 

Always capitalize words like these also:

 

Normal Summon

Special Summon

Graveyard

Deck

Tribute

Tributing

Level

(Blank) Counter

 

Also, be careful when you use commas, if they're used wrong, it will sound very confusing and/or change the actual effect.

 

Overall, 8.5/10, fix the OCG.

 

Thanx for the OCG 1 Rep comin your way any more comments

[Choke]

Your welcome. Thanks for the rep. I forgot to mention my rating on the pic. It looks very good, name fits the pic, so good job on that aspect.

 

Also, shouldn't this be a Continuous Spell Card? I think it has to be if your talking about once per turn effects.

[Nighthawk14]

Your welcome. Thanks for the rep. I forgot to mention my rating on the pic. It looks very good' date=' name fits the pic, so good job on that aspect.

 

Also, shouldn't this be a Continuous Spell Card? I think it has to be if your talking about once per turn effects.

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No they do not have to be continuous spell cards if they say once per turn i think

[Choke]

It's like a mix between a Field Spell and Continuous. :P

[Nighthawk14]

Bump

[Skyson]

It seems much more oriented towards being a Continuous Spell.

 

Oh yeah, it's also obscenely good.

 

The Dragon Counter thing is what should make this a Continuous Spell. The effects of Field Spells are free for both players to use unless the field spell specifically declares that a certain portion of its effect can only be used by the player who activated the card.

 

If both players can remove a Dragon-type monster to get Dragon Counters on it, then it becomes something like a battle to who can get to 3 on their turn so they can get the draw on their turn, since a "By removing counters from this card" is an ignition effect, and ignition effects have to be done by the turn player, e.g. Exiled Force.

 

This card does a load of good things. The last effect is unnecessarily good. Whenever any Dragon activates its effect, you get a free Graveyard Dragon. Once per turn, who cares? This does way too many good things without a single drawback.

 

It's over the top. I agree that Dragons need some kind of support, and I like field spells, but this is too much.

 

4/10.