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Judgment Dragon's Contest of Card Design [FINISHED]

Mr. Judgment Dragon

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[spoiler=My Cards]
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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discardong 2 Spellcaster-Type monsters from your hand. Increase this cards ATK by 200 for each Spellcaster-Type monster on your field. By discarding 1 card from your hand, you can decrease this cards ATK by 700 ATK to increase the ATK of 1 selected monster on the field by 700 points. If this card is destroyed by battle, remove this card from play.

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This cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This can only be Special Summoned if there are "Phantom" Monsters in both your 2nd and 4th Monster Card Zones. As long as there 3 or more "Phantom" monsters you control, your opponent can only select this card as a attack target. Once per turn, you can decrease this card's ATK by 700 in increase the ATK of 1 "Phantom" monster you control by 700 until the End Phase. If this card is in Defense Position, send this card to the Graveyard.

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http://el-grimlock.deviantart.com/art/knight-12637064
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Warrior-Type monsters you control. This card gains 100 ATK for every Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard. By sending 1 face-up Warrior-Type monster from your side of the field to Graveyard, you can negate the effect of a Spell or Trap Card and destroy it. When this card is destroyed, remove this card from play.
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BulletMan

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[spoiler=Cards]

 

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Effect:

You can Special Summon this card to your opponent's side of the field when they recieve Battle Damage from a monster you control during the damage step. This card cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon or a cards effect. While this card is on the field, each time the controller of this card Summons a monster or activates a Spell or Trap Card, place 1 Gar'guel Counter on this card. Lower this cards ATK by 150 x the number of Gar'guel Counters on this card. You must pay 300 Life Points for this card to attack x each Gar'guel Counter on this card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card attacks a monster with a higher ATK, negate the damage you would recieve and inflict the same amount of damage to the opponent of this cards controller. Destroy this card during the controllers 3rd Standby Phase. When this card is destroyed, except by its own effect, inflict 300 damage to the controller of this card for every Gar'guel Counter on it.

 

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Effect:

Once per turn, you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard. If it is a monster, place Spell Counters on this card equal to its Level. You can remove a number of Spell Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your Graveyard that has a Level equal to the amount of Spell Counters you removed.

 

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Mr. Judgment Dragon

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OK Guys. Here's the results:

 

[spoiler=Oliee_Beard]

Colourless Universe:

 

Balance: 13/25

Playability: 13/25

Design: 13/25

OCG: 12/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 61/100

 

Colourless Phoenix:

 

Balance: 16/25

Playability: 15/25

Design: 11/25

OCG: 11/15

Image: 6/10

TOTAL: 59/100

 

Colourless Dragon:

 

Balance: 18/25

Playability: 18/25

Design: 11/25

OCG: 11/15

Image: 9/10

TOTAL: 67/100

 

OVERALL TOTAL: 187/300

 

OCG errors were rather minor capitalization errors. deck should be Deck, Hand should be hand, zero should be 0. These cards overall were rather poorly designed and not really well thought out. Creating effects that seem overpowered and balancing them with unecessary drawbacks does not make a card well designed or balanced. It in fact makes the card less playable.

 

 

 

[spoiler=WhiteShadowGod]

White Crystal Wyvern:

 

Balance: 22/25

Playability: 24/25

Design: 17/25

OCG: 0/15

Image: 7/10

TOTAL: 70/100

 

Crystal Moon Dragon:

 

Balance: 5/25

Playability: 21/25

Design: 8/25

OCG: 13/15

Image: 8/10

TOTAL: 55/100

 

Fire Breath:

 

Balance: 14/25

Playability: 8/25

Design: 12/25

OCG: 12/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 56/100

 

OVERALL TOTAL: 181/300

 

What you did here was create a decent Synchro riddled with OCG errors, a Dark Hole with legs, and a rather weak piece of Type-Specific support. I think you could have done much better here.

 

 

 

[spoiler=blazejecar]

Lightogus, the Golden Dragon

 

Balance: 13/25

Playability: 11/25

Design: 0/25

OCG: 0/15

Image: 6/10

TOTAL: 30/100

 

Caldeum, the City of Gold:

 

Balance: 23/25

Playability: 19/25

Design: 4/25

OCG: 0/15

Image: 8/10

TOTAL: 54/100

 

Ultruleum, Lord of the Golden City:

 

Balance: 5/25

Playability: 0/25

Design: 0/25

OCG: 0/15

Image: 8/10

TOTAL: 8/100

 

OVERALL TOTAL: 92/300

 

A very poor entry. The cards you entered were full of OCG errors. Not only that, the choice in pictures was rather poor. I have seen at least 2 of these images more times than I care to count. There was also capitalization errors in the card name. The third card was also a hideously unplayable Nomi. Balancing a broken effect with terrible drawbacks that make the card unplayable does not make a balanced card.

 

 

 

[spoiler=OMGAKITTY]

Anarchist Magician:

 

Balance: 18/25

Playability: 20/25

Design: 18/25

OCG: 14/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 80/100

 

Legendary Hero:

 

Balance: 23/25

Playability: 22/25

Design: 22/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 92/100

 

The Pretentious Prince:

 

Balance: 24/25

Playability: 22/25

Design: 25/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 96/100

 

OVERALL TOTAL: 268/300

 

A very impressive entry. You could've done a few things differently with Anarchist Magician like allow the Tokens to be Tributed but not for a Tribute Summon and still keep the card in an acceptable territory. With the first card, the OCG seemed a little confusing but since you explained it clearly, you will only be penalized one point.

 

 

 

[spoiler=tommers2008]

Ambitious Hope:

 

Balance: 25/25

Playability: 20/25

Design: 20/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 90/100

 

Once Again They Rise:

 

Balance: 19/25

Playability: 18/25

Design: 17/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 79/100

 

Bandit Fairy:

 

Balance: 22/25

Playability: 25/25

Design: 19/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 9/10

TOTAL: 90/100

 

OVERALL TOTAL: 259/300

 

Another good entry. Card 2 was a little bit of a letdown. I think you gave it too many options for effects. 2 options would've been enough. It also requires a good degree of protection to be effective. Card 3 was quite good. The first 2 optional effects would've been enough. OCG was flawless for all the cards which was a good thing here.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Assegai]

You are disqualified as you were mean't to post 3 cards. Not 1.

 

 

 

[spoiler=~Colonel Sanders~]

Gasegar, the Terror of the Jungle:

 

Balance: 22/25

Playability: 25/25

Design: 25/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 97/100

 

Speed Synchro - Pyromatic Rider:

 

Balance: 21/25

Playability: 25/25

Design: 21/25

OCG: 13/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 90/100

 

Ancient Summoning Priest:

 

Balance: 25/25

Playability: 23/25

Design: 24/25

OCG: 14/15

Image: 8/10

TOTAL: 94/100

 

OVERALL TOTAL: 281/300

 

A very impressive entry. With the second card, you were penalized for using outdated OCG. I am a bit wary since according to the OCG of the card, it can be Synchro Summoned during the Battle Phase. Seems a little overpowered to me. At least the effect that can be activated as a result of that isn't overpowered. The third card, there was a minor error. In one of the sentences you forgot the s in Spell Counters.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Lord_Charmander]

Transmorgrified Zombie:

 

Balance: 12/25

Playability: 10/25

Design: 10/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 57/100

 

Stormfronted Roc from the Valley of Haze:

 

Balance: 20/25

Playability: 16/25

Design: 22/25

OCG: 12/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 80/100

 

Ancient Gear Cyborg:

 

Balance: 19/25

Playability: 11/25

Design: 13/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 68/100

 

OVERALL TOTAL: 205/300

 

Not a bad entry but not a good entry either. The OCG in all the cards was fine (although wording in the second card seemed a little off). You entered with 3 Nomis. One mistake you made was not making 2 of them Level 8. That would increase their playability. The second card entered was clearly the best of the 3 here despite being a part of the most undersupported Attributes in the game.

 

 

 

[spoiler=X-31 Fighter]

Master of the Skies:

 

Balance: 19/25

Playability: 12/25

Design: 18/25

OCG: 14/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 76/100

 

Phantom Deity Zorrac:

 

Balance: 22/25

Playability: 22/25

Design: 23/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 92/100

 

Knight of the Forgotten Age:

 

Balance: 22/25

Playability: 14/25

Design: 18/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 79/100

 

OVERALL TOTAL: 247/300

 

The first card made me LOL with that typo (discardong = discarding) and a little sad because of the summoning conditions. The Summoning conditions here was a bit of a letdown with the cards. The second card however was quite well made. The third card would've been better as a Synchro to be quite honest. Not a bad entry overall but could've been better.

 

 

 

[spoiler=X-L YEAHHHH!!!]

Dark Spy - Gar'Guel

 

Balance: 20/25

Playability: 25/25

Design: 21/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 9/10

TOTAL: 90/100

 

Noble Magician:

 

Balance: 25/25

Playability: 25/25

Design: 25/25

OCG: 15/15

Image: 9/10

TOTAL: 99/100

 

Spirit Break:

 

Balance: 16/25

Playability: 25/25

Design: 19/25

OCG: 14/15

Image: 10/10

TOTAL: 84/100

 

OVERALL TOTAL: 273/300

 

A very impressive entry. Card 3 seems overpowered since you can Summon the monster directly from your Deck with no real cost. I think up the cost to removing 5 monsters from play. 3 seems too easy to do. The other 2 are great. Card 1 seems a little harsh on the controller because it can't be Tributed IMO. Card 2 is very good. Actually one of the best cards you could really ask for without being overpowered.

 

 

 

[spoiler=WINNERS]

1st: ~Colonel Sanders~ 281/300

2nd: X-L YEAHHHH!!! 273/300

3rd: OMGAKITTY 268/300

 

 

 

 

Congratualtions to all winners. +Reps will be given out as soon as possible.

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