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some more cards of mine


hamcha

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Lore: You can activate this card if you have 2 or more monsters on the field. Draw 1 card for every monster on the field.

 

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Lore: you can send 1 lv monster from your hand to the graveyard or tribute 1 lv monster on your side of the field to special summon a higher lv monster from your deck.

 

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Lore: This card is used to special summon 1 "Toon Dark Magician Girl" from your hand.

 

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Lore: You can send 1 card to the graveyard to draw 1 card from your deck.

 

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Lore: Draw 1 card for every monster with 2000 ATK or more on the field and in your hand.

 

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Lore: When you have all 3 "Egyptian Gods" on the field, they can ATK your opponents Life points directly. Their ATK cannot be stopped by Spells, Traps or monster effects.

 

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Lore: When summoned, draw 4 cards and you take 1000 damage. When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard by 1 of your opponents effects, draw 1 card and inflict 500 direct damage to your opponent.

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Most are overpowered.

Drawing up to 10 cards without cost is OP

You don't say "send to the graveyard from your hand" you say "discard".

The 3rd card is underpowered.

There are no cards with "Egiptian god" in their names, you should say the name of each 1.

And some other details. You just need to improve a bit.

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[align=center]Your ideas are somewhat okay, but you make them too powerful, when making a card, think to yourself, would this be fair if my opponent used it against me :?

 

Anyway, here's your rating:

 

Name: 3/5

Stars: 4/5

Effect: 6/10

Attribute: 3/5

Type: 3/5

ATK: 8/10

DEF: 8/10

Pic: 7/10 (overused)

OCG: 5/10 (its OK)

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TOTAL: 47/60 :D

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pretty good, but to help improve your cards

 

-Read official OCG thread

-Think of more creative effects

-try not to OP your cards.

 

;) keep it up *thumbs up*[/align]

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