First Card I MADE !!!!!!! post AT WILL I WANT TO KNOW what i did wrong

[Dream Dragon]

I know its not good but i am just beggining to make my cards i am not good. I know i am not good at spelling

 

 

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bump

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opps i for got to thank the artist

 

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q13/selenaGOS/Monsters%20and%20Creatures/waterdragon.jpg

 

 

 

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[Atomix]

Don't bump in less then 24 hours and Image Credit is needed.

[Dream Dragon]

i GOT THE PIC. FROM GOOGLE SORRY

 

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q13/selenaGOS/Monsters%20and%20Creatures/waterdragon.jpg

[Ghost Ryder]

The card is ok i guess but you should give it an effect, it should be a Level 7 monster.

There's an OCG error, no full stops.

[Dream Dragon]

bump

[TrickyPooBoy]

It should be "Sea Serpent" Type. 9/10.

[beamsabre]

There's already an effect monster called Water Dragon. Start by changing the name. Plan out what you want your cards to do. It's OK if you make a few mistakes your first time out. There are a lot of good people here that will help you. Listen only to those who offer you constructive criticism. View other posts for inspiration. Good luck to you.

[crossader]

from what i see, the only 2 small details u could change here is lower its lvl to 7 or 6 and give him an effect. anyway, image is extremely awesome.

[Force_Flex]

-_- no vannilas plz (normal monsters) that is were you went wrong -_-

[Dream]

change the name (there is already a water dragon), give it an effect, make it's type dragon or sea serpent, but i like the pic.

[♫Griffinsusername♫]

My eyes!!! so many problems. Name, card type, level, balance, Card type... 1.5/10

[Lovemoon]

Not bad it shood be Effect monster.7/10

[dashwarren]

needs to be effect monsters and needs a better pic 7/10

 

 

 

click one of my eggs to make it one step closer to hatching into...what? find out what when you click one

[Womi]

ok, make an effect

[Mazerrick]

things that need to change:

 

- There is already a water dragon change it to something like WHIRLPOOL DRAGON.

- Make it a common monster.

- Make it 6 or 7 stars.

- Leave the circulation blank.

- Type should be Sea Serpent.

- Period!!!!

 

to make it look like it is real:

 

- Change the creator to Kasuki Takahashi

- Change the date to 1996

- Change ID to something like DDWD-EN001

 

suggestions:

 

- Make it an effect monster.

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Thats about all I can think of.

 

Rating: 1/10.

[Guest Dark-Azkrin666]

things that need to change:

 

- There is already a water dragon change it to something like WHIRLPOOL DRAGON.

- Make it a common monster.

- Make it 6 or 7 stars.

- Leave the circulation blank.

- Type should be Sea Serpent.

- Period!!!!

 

to make it look like it is real:

 

- Change the creator to Kasuki Takahashi

- Change the date to 1996

- Change ID to something like DDWD-EN001

 

suggestions:

 

- Make it an effect monster.

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Thats about all I can think of.

 

Rating: 1/10.

1: about curculation he could make it say 1st Edition

2: i've seen real Yugioh cards that are common but ultra rare at this level before and no i'm not talking about "Blue Eyes White Dragon" ethire

other then that your correct

[DNovaKnight]

lvl, effect, name, type all should be changed. But the pic does rock :P

[TheGiver]

good pic i used it for one of mine.It is ok for a first but one thing is,fact it was better than mine

[assanaut]

a basic monster. The grammar and description are awkward. 7/10.

[Dragon Master of Olympo]

its good for your first try im new but i know its good

[ThePharoahIncarnate937]

Ok-_- If you don't want to see vanillas...why. the. hell. isnt. their. a. rule. NO VANILLAS IN THE FORUMS.

Why the funk, is there a way to make vanillas(or, Normal Monsters, if you want to actually go with "ocg" which so many of you seem to whore over.) on the YCM? People who are just starting out, TYPICALLY make vanillas. neg, flame, w.e...im just here to make cards, print them out and collect them, or own my friends with them..w.e..I come to the forums to see what I can find in the way of new ideas...i dont typically post in the forums, because so many people here arent worth dealing with, unless i see a really stupid issue, like this-_-

You know, for anybody you actually PLAYS this game, last metagame, you could build a pretty sick "VANILLA" deck, and often win with it. Anyone who says Vanillas are bad, you need to learn how to play.

Perhaps somebody here could enlighten me?

Why are vanillas, or normal monsters, so hated here?

Its a card.

get over it.

*rant over*

On topic. Nice card for a first attempt, yeah theres a card called water dragon...so?

yeah its a vanilla...so?

yeah its 7 stars 2400 attack no effect....so?

yeah some of the card details are off...so?

yeah its got an "ocg" error...so?

Its a yugioh card, that he made for a first attempt. Yugioh people...yugioh. Its NOT seriuz buzniss.

Good card, keep up the good work vanilla guy^^

[Womi]

yeah. if you create one card and post it, its not bad if its vanilla. But if you create a whole set, then you shouldnt have only or as good as only normal monsters. But of course youre right. Vanillas are cards like every card else. But often it looks noobish. ß}

[LiAM]

[align=center]vanillas aer hatedbecause they require no talent in card making,

 

insert a picture, add stats. - done.

 

where as giving it an effect makes the card a whole lot more playable and makes it more than a pretty picture, it has a game altering effect or something that will really help with other cards, normal mosnters... suck,

 

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[Womi]

you got it!

[tdoggy1818]

like so many people have said name for one thing,power,stars level, and please make it an effect for the love of everyone else.1/10