demondslay3r Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 this is my first card and please tell me how to make it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Lacks a subtype, an original image, and its a DIVINE monster. Its effect is also poorly worded. Should be something more along the lines of "During each End Phase, destroy 1 card in your opponent's hand" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Try not to use attachments and your card could use some work. The entire lore is an OCG error which needs revising and the image is already used in a real card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JinKazama Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 horrid take out the commas and put the "+" sign instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSM Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Where'd you get the artwork?The effect is really badly written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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