Nighthawk14 Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 [spoiler=Effect of Winged Dark Magician Girl]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 "Dark Magician Girl" to the Graveyard. Once per turn you can halve this cards ATK until the end phase to apply 1 of the following effects: * This card can attack twice on the same battle phase. * This card can attack your opponents Life Points directly. For each card that includes "Dark Magician" in there card names in your graveyard this card gains 300 ATK. [spoiler=Effect of Advanced Red Eyes Black Dragon]1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned, you can discard 1 card in your hand to destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. When this card attacks a Defense Position monster, you can discard 1 card in your hand to the graveyard to change that monster to Attack Position. When this card is destroyed add 3 cards you discarded with this cards effect from your graveyard to your hand if 1 of them was a Level 4 or lower monster Special Summon it. PLEASE inform me of any OCG i am trying to improve i think it just commas, but any thing else you spot please tell meWhy wont any one Rate any of my cards i just want ratings good or bad that also includes Comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Your OCG errors are more than just missing commas. I'll fix both: Winged Dark Magician Girl: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 "Dark Magician Girl" to the Graveyard. Once per turn you can halve this cards ATK until the end phase to apply 1 of the following effects: * This card can attack twice during the same battle phase. * This card can attack your opponent directly. For each "Dark Magician" card in your Graveyard, increase the ATK of this card by 300. Advanced Red-Eyes Black Dragon: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned, you can discard 1 card in your hand to destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. When this card attacks a Defense Position monster, you can send 1 card in your hand to the graveyard to change that monster to Attack Position. When this card is destroyed, add up to 3 cards you sent to the Graveyard with this card's effect to your hand. If 1 of those cards was a Level 4 or lower monster, Special Summon it. I think I got all the OCG. The pictures both look pretty good. They both seem relatively well balanced. Not bad overall. Just fix the OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighthawk14 Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Your OCG errors are more than just missing commas. I'll fix both: Winged Dark Magician Girl: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 "Dark Magician Girl" to the Graveyard. Once per turn you can halve this cards ATK until the end phase to apply 1 of the following effects: * This card can attack twice during the same battle phase. * This card can attack your opponent directly. For each "Dark Magician" card in your Graveyard' date=' increase the ATK of this card by 300. Advanced Red-Eyes Black Dragon: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned, you can discard 1 card in your hand to destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. When this card attacks a Defense Position monster, you can send 1 card in your hand to the graveyard to change that monster to Attack Position. When this card is destroyed, add up to 3 cards you sent to the Graveyard with this card's effect to your hand. If 1 of those cards was a Level 4 or lower monster, Special Summon it. I think I got all the OCG. The pictures both look pretty good. They both seem relatively well balanced. Not bad overall. Just fix the OCG.[/quote']thanx your the first person to rate these will fix tomorrow anyway 1 Rep comin your way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 nice cards I like 'em 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 The OCG I believe has been fixed already. The images are really nice, though have not placed image credit. Though they do seem balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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