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Once per turn, you can send 1 card on your side of the field (except this card) to the Graveyard. If you do, it gains the following effect :

- Normal Monster Card : This card gains 400 ATK.

- Effect Monster Card : This card gains 200 ATK and DEF.

- Spell Card : Inflict 800 damage to your opponent.

- Trap Card : Return 1 card on the field to the owner's hand.

- Fusion Monster Card : Destroy 2 cards on the field.

- Ritual Monster Card : Remove from play 2 cards on the field.

- Synchro Monster Card : Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field.

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Actually, I like it. I like it a lot, really. However, I would change the wording to:

 

Once per turn, you can send one monster you control to the graveyard, except this card, to apply the appropriate effect:

 

It might be slightly overpowered, so maybe give it a negative effect? Like, if you Special Summon it you have to tribute a Dragon-Type monster?

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Actually' date=' I like it. I like it a lot, really. However, I would change the wording to:

 

Once per turn, you can send one monster you control to the graveyard, except this card, to apply the appropriate effect:

 

It might be slightly overpowered, so maybe give it a negative effect? Like, if you Special Summon it you have to tribute a Dragon-Type monster?

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Thank you very much :D

 

and thanks also for giving me the right OCG and some errors.

 

Ok, i'll fix it and re-post it

 

should I give up on those monster's group (Fusion Monster Card, Synchro, whatever) and make it like "Monster Card"?

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Actually' date=' I like it. I like it a lot, really. However, I would change the wording to:

 

Once per turn, you can send one monster you control to the graveyard, except this card, to apply the appropriate effect:

 

It might be slightly overpowered, so maybe give it a negative effect? Like, if you Special Summon it you have to tribute a Dragon-Type monster?

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Once per turn, you can send 1 Card you control to the Graveyard, (except this card), to activate 1 of the following effects:

 

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Its send 1 card becuase you have the effects of Spells and Traps, and they arent monster cards ;)[/align]

 

 

 

 

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*facepalm*

 

I HAFF FAILED IN THE OCG!

 

But yeah' date=' thanks for pointing that out, yujioooh.

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[align=center]At Least you did your best to fix, just next time make sure your 100% correct, otherwise he could edit the card and still have it wrong.

 

just check the OCG thread regularly or something, check up on your Grammar.[/align]

 

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What a wonderful creation you have there!Well done!

 

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(I would continue it but it would be spam...LOL!)

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