Coraline Girl Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 I'm new at this site so don't be too harsh. Image Credit goes to Google Images and "DeviantART". I'm hoping to make this a set but it's hard to find images. [spoiler=The Other Mother-Beldam][spoiler=Beldam's Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The Other World". When this card battles with an opponent's monster decrease the targeted monster's ATK by 300. If this card battles with a "Cat" or "Kitty" monster decrease this card's ATK by 500. [spoiler=Coraline Jones][spoiler=Coraline's Effect]When this card is Normal Summoned toss a coin. If heads add 1 "The Other World" from your Deck to your hand. If Tails decrease your Life Points by 300. [spoiler=Wybie Lovat][spoiler=Wybie Fun Fact]He's a Movie only character, I thought it was interesting to see a non-book character. [spoiler=Wybie's Effect]If this card is in your hand when a "Coraline Jones" is Normal Summoned you may Special Summon this card to your field. This card gains 200 ATK for each face-up Insect-Type monster on the field. [spoiler=The Other Father][spoiler=Other Father's Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned unless "The Other Mother-Beldam" is face-up on your field. If there is face-up "Coraline Jones" on the field this card loses 200 ATK. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you may Release the card to Special Summon 1 "The Other Father-Beldam's Control" from your Deck to your field. [spoiler=The Other World][spoiler=Other World's Effect]All face-up cards with "Other" in thier name gain 500 ATK. When this card is activated you can Release 1 LIGHT monster to Special Summon 1 "The Other Mother-Beldam" from your Deck to your field. Once per turn toss a coin. If Heads draw one card. If Tails discard one card from your hand. If this card would be destroyed you can Release one face-up "Other" monster you control to add 1 "The Other World" from your Deck to your hand. [spoiler=The Cat][spoiler=The Cat's Effect]When you control "The Other World", increase this card ATK by 300. You can discard 2 cards from your hand to increase the ATK of 1 face-up "Coraline Jones" you control by 400. Once per turn, if this card is selected as an attack target you may toss a coin. If heads negate the attack and add this card to your hand. If tails decrease your Life Points by 400. [spoiler=The Other Mother's Spy-Coraline Doll][spoiler=Spy's Effect]When this card is activated add one "Coraline Jones" from your Deck to your hand. Once per turn, you may toss a coin. If heads place 1 Button Counter (max. 5) on this card. If tails decrease your Life Points by 300. If this card has 5 Button Counters on it you may Release this card to Special Summon 1 "The Other Mother-Beldam" from your Deck to your field ignoring the Summoning conditions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Good Card, That's Great for a new member, The OCG Seems Perfect, 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Wow,Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 . [align=center]Well, Here's my rating :P You've followed the rules, impressive ;) Anyway, I will need to see more cards from the Set, because i don't know what these 'Other world' or 'cats' do. Interesting and balanced effects from what i can see, though I'm guessing there's support. Your OCG is ALMOST perfect, i was like 'OMG :shock: a newbie made these'. But yeah, pretty good *thumbs up* Try finding matching images as well, preferably card worthy. Without borders or text ;) RatingName: 4/5 Stars: 4/5 Effect: 8/10 Attribute: 3/5 Type: 4/5 ATK: 8/10 DEF: 7/10 Pic: 5/10 OCG: 9/10_________________________________TOTAL: 42/60 _________________________________ That's just nearly 75%, Well done! Pretty impressed with your overall cards, (2 at present rating). I hope to see more and hopefully some 'Realistic' ones, i'm not usually a fan of pop culture cards ;)[/align] P.S.:[/b] Do not reply directly to this post, if you wish to contact me, do it via PM. Its the best to ensure a quick reply. I will help you with OCG or finding suitable images ;) . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Wow, for a newbie these are pretty good. Great job so far. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Thanks! I really can't believe I'm getting these Ratings. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Me neither. I'm glad you're not a noob I have criticise the hell out of. I only give you an 8/10 because the first card's pic creeps me the f*** out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 [align=center]lol, i got your message, OCG is Official Card Grammar. Its when instead of saying,: 'This card cannot die', you say: 'this card cannot be destroyed by battle.' ;) :P I will point out hte few errors i saw...[/align] [spoiler=[b]card #1[/b]:]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The Other World". When this card battles with an opponent's monster decrease the targeted mosnters ATK by 300 during Damage Calculation. If this card battles with a monster that has "Cat" or "Kitty" in it's name, this card loses 500 ATK points. BTW, not sure about the long sentence, you might want to look up the effect on yugiohwikia ) [spoiler=[b]Card #2[/b]:]When this card is Normal Summoned toss a coin. If heads, add 1 "The Other World" from your Deck to your hand. If Tails, decrease your Life Points by 300. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 To "Shradow":Well the books a Horror Novel and the Movie's a little creepy too. But the Other Mother's pic is a little creepy... To "Yujioooh":I fixed the OCG errors you spotted :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 These are really cool. Great OCG, and for a newbie, too. I just think that you could've gotten a better pic for Coraline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 . [align=center]You know, just because you actually read my comment, and seem to be wanting to improve your cards, and already made great cards for a newbie, I'm going to give you +1 REP. I am on my way to 50 :P (nearly), your on your way to 3... :D hopefully you will become a really experienced member! Hope to hear from your in the future! :D[/align] . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 That was the best pic I could find so far.... But I'll try to find a better one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 these are really cool cards XD 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Nice, Nice. 9.5/10. Probably check http://www.deviantart.com/ for images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 O.K. I'll try there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 By the way, Coraline seems a tad overpowered, but its okay. I usually think of 1600 ATk as about the value of a Clone from Star Wars. I give these a 8/10 Nice! I have a small weakness for Coraline. How was the movie? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Thanks and the Movie was Great in my opinion! It was a really cool in 3-D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 It's weird thinking of Coraline as a Warrior. When I think of Warriors, I think of Vikings with large Axes, not a character like Coraline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Yea, I just couldn't think of another type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the worm Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Way better then my first cards. I'll rate a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Thanks ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Who would've thought of that? 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coraline Girl Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Of what? Thanks for the Rating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 For the type, try Fairy. Well, she is a girl, right. And she's not evil. So i guess Fairy is the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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