Antharyx Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Give me your opinion, this was the first card I ever made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 OCG is not so good. Neither is the pic, it needs a background... Name isn't so good either. But the effect is a good one. You should make it a flip effect, that would be better. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 pic is unimpressive, though you should lower its lv to 2 and makt its stats 500 atk, 300 def (then make it flip effect) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 pic is unimpressive' date=' though you should lower its lv to 2 and makt its stats 500 atk, 300 def (then make it flip effect)[/quote'] Good point. I did not notice the level, ATK, and DEF. I looked at the effect and pic... =/It is OP. A 6 star monster should not be that strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 BOOOOOOOO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 If this card is attacked by an opponents monster, this card is automatically sent to the Graveyard and the attacking monster loses 500 ATK. I think that is what your effect is ment to say. I fixed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 BOOOOOOOO Say something more. Don't make lousy posts like that. If this card is attacked by an opponents monster' date=' this card is automatically sent to the Graveyard and the attacking monster loses 500 ATK. I think that is what your effect is ment to say. I fixed it.[/quote'] He wanted the owner of the attack card to lose 500 Life Points, not for the attacking card to lose 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Its effect is massivly flawed. Its like Yubel, but alot weaker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 ... meh. Who'd bother attackin' this? meh/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antharyx Posted February 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 thanks for the replies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Could probably use a better name than "The Epic Bird" "it is automatically sent to the Graveyard" <--which monster? Life Points 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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