Basherbelding Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 The Next day after Ray Had Received his money he took a Luxury Limo Ride to the airport To go to America! Two Hours later..... The limo had arrived at the airport Ray happily walked out the limo and headed towards the entrance to the Airport. Loads of people were in the airport and it was very big!Ray Bought His Ticket and went into a Snack Shop. Ray Bought Himself a Glass 250ml Bottle of Coke and a King Size Packet of crisps all for £1.85 and sat down. A Tall Chubby Muscular man With Tattoos all over his boby walked into the snack shop and sat in front of Ray. The Man Picked up rayed drink drank it and tried to smash in on Rays Head. Ray Backed Of..... "leave Me Alone" Shouted Ray "No" Shouted the man Ray in anger ran at the man grabbed the Glass Bottle of cake and pulled it he man he managed to get it out the mans grip and ray then smashed in over his leg the man fell to the ground! Ray Ran out the Snack Shop and sat down of a bench (far away from the snack bar) .....Long later....... Ray Got on the plane and headed for America! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 i like it a lot thought it would have been better to decribe the scrence but i can imagine it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 quite short but kep the cards in the same thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted September 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 I will get more detail in other chapters there may me a street fight in the next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Cool Cant wait am starting my Chapter 5 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 cool idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 oh i mean the chapters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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